it's decent for a first ytp. I want to point out that you shouldn't wait so much time between jokes, which leaves the viewers bored in the places that are not jokes. As you improve making ytps, you should create better jokes to speed up the momentum of your poop. Other than that, it's all up to you dude. And yes, get sony vegas or after effects. Most poopers use vegas, but there are higher quality, more experienced poopers who use after effects like numberer1.
