First Spaceship Build - (IMG Heavy)

[mcs]

Edit: New images posted a few posts down

Hi

This is my first Spaceship build, I've had it up on a server for a few days and I've received mostly good comments about it, but I'd like to see what some of the more talented people here have to say about it (and suggestions/constructive criticism would be VERY helpful)


Back of the ship:


Jail:


Front:


Front side:


Hangar:


Stairs to ship dock & jail:


Kitchen/cafeteria:


Food:


Cafeteria table:


Cafeteria:


Crew rooms hallway:


Entrance to crew room hallway:


Looking towards the back from front of ship:


Crew computers:


Weapon area:


Front inside of ship [command center]:


Command center:


Looking towards back of ship and west crew room area:


Reactor room:


Command center from bridge above:


Shot from bridge:


Reactors:


Back (entrance) of ship:


Back of ship:


Back of ship:


Front angle shot:


Back angle shot:


Front:


Front with dock/hangar:




Sorry for the huge amount of images, thanks for looking.

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[Kicken Wing]

Looks pretty good, I especially like the large front windows, it's a nice change from the normal small front roosterpit that most spaceship builds have. If I could suggest one this it would to do something with the top of the ship it's just a little to flat and plain. Other than that it looks great.

[LoserHero]

Makes me think of Star Wars. Great Job.

[Nick4t]

Cool ship! :D

[Z9-C]

Its pretty good, it seems you have got the detailing work down, but the overall shape of the ship looks far to blunt. (Not boxy, just blunt)  Try combining diffrent size slopes to make curves.

In the picture of the front angle of the ship; the main part of the ship looks nice and curvy, but the sides look like two boxes hanging off the side, it would look much nicer if there were ramps going from the sides to the fuselage, right now it looks like two random boxes tacked onto the sides.

The interior is very nice, nothing seems out of place or randomly macroed/duplicated into any spot to make it seem less open. I really like the escape pods, they follow the classic cylinder shape, but they still look original.

I can see that you really put your blood sweat and tears into it.

Overall its very nice, keep up the good work ;D

[Spiderpig]

Hey you finished the jail

[Snowstar]

I think it looks much better than anything i could ever make

[Reformist]

Wow...this is pretty good :D

[Toadzard]

Now way that this is your first build!
The third picture is awesome. 9.10, just work on those interiors.

[NoZoner]

It's not his first build, it's his first space ship build.

But it's still pretty good. Probably better than what I would make from time to time (But then again, I never fully built a spaceship in Blockland)

If you were to allow me to rate: 9/10

[troy001234]

its great i give an 8.9/10 lol also the 1.1 was because some parts look a little spammy

[mcs]

Thanks for all the comments/suggestions so far :) I tried working on the suggestions and so far I'm pretty happy with what I've come up with for them, let me know if anyone has any further additions/fixes I should work on. I'll post a few screens of what I've added

The row of laser cannons added to the top of the ship to make it less plain, thanks Kicken Wing (my favorite picture, kinda looks like a dragon head now :D)


Angle shot showing the slopes added to make it look less blunt (thanks Z9-C)


Closeup of cannon:


Side shot of cannons:


Looking down hallway to cannon entrances:



Any other constructive criticism would be great, it helps a lot. :) Thanks

[Zaie]

Wow, Very nice.
I don't think I've ever seen you before?
I like your building skills too.

[mcs]

Wow, Very nice.
I don't think I've ever seen you before?
I like your building skills too.

Thanks :) Yeah, I got blockland back in december but up until 3 or 4 days ago I had only played singleplayer, I'm just now getting into the online part of BL haha

[Z9-C]

Thanks for taking my advice, it looks much better now :D

May we rate?