Now that I can say something, aka unbanned.
1. I like ppl who try to make maps, but your first one is not going to be a epic win.
2. Now take all the comments that every one has said, and put them into the map.
3. Just a few tips for making maps, even though a don't make maps I know a good map when I see one.
4. Try not to have steep cliffs and mountains.
5, Don't stretch texures.
6. Try to leave enough room to build.
and there you have it, now I know most of this has been said and use it to make better maps.
And keep up the good work.