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If you guys want a challenge: Make up a good poem with the rhyme scheme - ABAB CDDC EFFE GHGH
It's harder than it sounds to make up one that is actually good.

The letters represent the sound at the end of a word, or the letter USED at the end? Or.. something else?

The letters represent the sound at the end of a word, or the letter USED at the end? Or.. something else?
Every A needs to rhyme with A, every B needs to rhyme with B, ect

If you guys want a challenge: Make up a good poem with the rhyme scheme - ABAB CDDC EFFE GHGH
It's harder than it sounds to make up one that is actually good.
When did this come?
How can it be?
Was I too dumb,
too dumb to see?

Your love has faded.
What can I say,
I thought you would stay.
Now I'm just jaded.

The sky is black,
because you are gone.
I was your pawn,
but I still want you back.

But It's too late,
what should I do?
Should I just wait?
Or find someone new?

(o god that rhyme scheme sucks lol)
« Last Edit: October 03, 2008, 06:02:58 PM by Panterra8905 »

Use this rhyme scheme:
ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZZYX WVUTSRQPONMLKJIHGFEDCBA


You guys like mine? It was like.. my 3rd attempt at poetry beside school.
I like it. It sounds like you are talking to ladios though.

I like it. It sounds like you are talking to ladios though.
And what of mine?

Sorry but it sounds like a rip off of another poem.

Sorry but it sounds like a rip off of another poem.

I did copy/paste it and changed the last part, but only because I could not describe myself anymore that that poem.


I like it. It sounds like you are talking to ladios though.
Actually.. talking to myself. D;

Then take your own damn advice. If that fails you always have Google.

poetry is not half bad... as long as im not the one writing it

Bump for new piece I've written.

The Lines I've Drawn

Walking down this dark dirt road,
the clouds do block the moon,
passing spirits still unbowed-
they won't surrender soon.
Passing graves so messily strewn,
with regret I was bestowed,
I felt the cold would collapse me soon,
graves look so cold as I watch them corrode.
I felt like living must be better than this,
walking through an uncertain abyss,
I come upon a fork in the road,
a path leading to fire and one to gold,
I cannot seem to choose on my own,
that time for me has long been gone,
no more time to admit or atone,
now death must trace the lines I've drawn.

Bump for new piece I've written.

The Lines I've Drawn

Walking down this dark dirt road,
the clouds do block the moon,
passing spirits still unbowed-
they won't surrender soon.
Passing graves so messily strewn,
with regret I was bestowed,
I felt the cold would collapse me soon,
graves look so cold as I watch them corrode.
I felt like living must be better than this,
walking through an uncertain abyss,
I come upon a fork in the road,
a path leading to fire and one to gold,
I cannot seem to choose on my own,
that time for me has long been gone,
no more time to admit or atone,
now death must trace the lines I've drawn.

Nice Bump :3