Life in Black and White - New Site

[Netwars4]

you win.

[Ad Bot]

[VerticalHorizon]

Chapter 2 has been posted.

[Dropshock]

Holy stuff. I just all of the sudden wanted to read this... This story... Its so good. I love it. I think you may have found a future carer(sp? o:).

[NickTheSushi]

tl;dr :D

It's a story. You read a story...

[Lt Chub Chub]

carer(sp? o:).

Just cause you asked (not grammar national socialist) it's spelt career.

[Dropshock]

Just cause you asked (not grammar national socialist) it's spelt career.

Haha, Thanks. I was so loving tired when I posted that.

[Reis03]

want more!!

ha anyways, great story VH. see you around.

[LoserHero]

I think you should use more commas in the dialogue... it seems kind of weird to see "But honey I don't want to have to..." as opposed to "But, honey, I don't want to have to...".

Maybe that's just me being used to using a lot of commas.

"But honey, I don't want to have to.." Would be most arguably correct.

[Spiderpig]

Needs to be a movie now!

[Robo Noob]

Hawt uses the name Paul :D pretty much describes me too ;o

[VerticalHorizon]

UPDATE:

I have made a site now, you can read it there. Also other things.

[VerticalHorizon]

Added Chapter 3a to site, read news for details.

[Tom]

"Holy smoke! An error occurred."

When I tried to dl.

[VerticalHorizon]

Hm, maybe there's a problem with others downloading from 110's servers, let me upload the chapters to another site and rehost, will be up in a few.

[VerticalHorizon]

Double toast: The chapters have been uploaded to Scribd, enjoy.