Shabach's First build! Criticism welcome!

[Shabach]

Hey, this is my first build ever!

It is a Zombie DM
There are helpful teleports to get you back to the build if you get lost.
Almost all functions of the Zombie storage areas are controlled on a panel.
Has some pretty cool events
Neat areas
...and Zombies!

This is the bottom, if you fall here, there is a way to get back to the top

Overview of the top area

The uber-console,EVERYbutton does something

This is the outside of one of the Zombie areas

This is a cool symbol I made when testing out relay events, it is on the ground, everything else is in the air!


Oh...and don't worry about bricks, only 5343!

Here is the save if you want it
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?hgmloknmddz
And you can use the overview as a save pic
http://i427.photobucket.com/albums/pp352/Shabach13/Blockland_00030-1.png

Enjoy!!!

Feel free to comment

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[Otis Da HousKat]

Too small to be good for zombies.

The pictures are way too small.

[Shabach]

mmmk. can fix

[MrCookie]

What's with those white things at the first picture?

[Shabach]

oh, right, those are the laser emitters, they go through other bricks, so i had to build the whole bottom area to make the rest of the build look better

[MrCookie]

oh, right, those are the laser emitters, they go through other bricks, so i had to build the whole bottom area to make the rest of the build look better

Try covering it, it would make it look a whole lot nicer. :)

[Shabach]

I did, it goes through the bricks, so that is why I made the whole bottom area, you can't normally get to that area unless you try, you cant see those from anywhere else.

[Ethan]

Nice for a first build.

[Shabach]

the overview pic is only the top, there is a whole underside too.

[Truce]

B
O
R

ING

I see that ;3

[Reformist]

I enjoy boring as well.

[chilmans]

I don't have the phone print, where to download?

[Shabach]

hey, here is the link for the new telephone:
http://forum.blockland.us/index.php?topic=40935.0

[Chaos Master]

It's good.
But... it could be better.
P.S: I can see a face on the roof!

[chilmans]

I download it, and it was very good for a first build!
But the events aren't so very good.
The teleport on the ground is really good.
But why are those zombies not in the place where the houses are.
And why do you die i you touch the ground?

Anyway: I tried it with zombies on, and i was in the saferoom, and I changed the minigame, that the zombies can destroy bricks, so the safe room wasn't save anymore :)
I ran and on someway I came out of the building, and then I saw all those zombies coming out of the building! THAT was FUN!