Drama Storyboard

[Spation]

Basically I've been asked to write a script for Drama that revolves around alcohol. Being the hilarious person that I am I decided to do it in a moderately funny way. So after a quick brainstorming session with the 'co-writer' we came up with a coupl'a ideas.
Basic storyboard: (Sorry about my bad art skills/massive picture/terrible handwriting/inability to remember what the hammer and sickle logo actually looks like)
http://www.spation.co.uk/junk/Drama%20Storyboard%20BIG.png
It's not in [img] tags because it's fudging huge.

Suggestions/criticism welcome

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[Aaglo]

Hard to read.
 
Subtitles in english?

[Spation]

Hard to read.
 
Subtitles in english?

It is in English:

...Sorry about my ...terrible handwriting...

[Aaglo]

It is in English:

I know, I was talking about easy to read, Arial font english.

[Spation]

I know, I was talking about easy to read, Arial font english.

Just squint.

[General Omega]

Spat, what program did you use? I know that most editors do use a type tool as even MS paint does.

[Spation]

I loving wrote it with the loving brush tool. It's not impossible to read, it's perfectly legible if you're not a complete handicap.

[|Shadow]

...Being the hilarious person that I am...

Silly Spation, you nawt funny.

[TheWorm]

it's perfectly legible

It most certainly is not, why would you even do that when it is so much easier to type?
Also, I think I missed the jokes, or something.

[General Omega]

This is what i got from it:
This is John

This is John's GF - Genearic GF 32Who is gotNo, Fatter, like a real poker.NO! FATTER!Oh, that will have to do.And the gay guy (Not really creamy, he just isn't nice) will be represented by thir...Irish Pirate gan of Amy Winehouse on a run bridge.Then stuff happens and Pirate and John end up in jail and salty hookers on a breadroll and gets depressed

The moral of the story is:

A hooker makes bad stuff happen.

[Spation]

This is what i got from it:
This is John

This is John's GF - Genearic GF 32Who is gotNo, Fatter, like a real poker.NO! FATTER!Oh, that will have to do.And the gay guy (Not really creamy, he just isn't nice) will be represented by thir...Irish Pirate gan of Amy Winehouse on a run bridge.Then stuff happens and Pirate and John end up in jail and salty hookers on a breadroll and gets depressed

The moral of the story is:

A hooker makes bad stuff happen.

That's close-ish.

It most certainly is not, why would you even do that when it is so much easier to type?
Also, I think I missed the jokes, or something.

Because I had my tablet out, it was just a quick sketch to get my ideas down. It's perfectly legible, you're just being a richard about it.

[Panterra8905]

This is what i got from it:
This is John

This is John's GF - Generic GF 32Who is fatNo, Fatter, like a real porker.NO! FATTER!Ok, that'll have to do.And the bad guy (Not really the enemy, he just isn't nice) will be represented by this...Irish Communist Pirate son of Amy Winehouse on a rum binge
Amy Winehouse yaay.   (barrel of rum)Then stuff happens and the Pirate and John end up in jail and Salty chokes on a breadroll and gets depressed. The moral of the story is-
Alchohol makes bad stuff happen.

I fixed it.

[snot2]

i can read it

[|Shadow]

i can read it

same here
must be some british thing

[Spation]

same here
must be some british thing

Yeah, we aren't lazy bastards who expect everything to be in Anti-Aliased Arial for us.