Drama Storyboard

[Khorde]

This is all I can decipher

Frame 1: This is John (Name subject to change) -- This is John's GF - Generic GF 32...

Frame 2: Who is fat

Frame 3: No, Fatter. Like a real porker.

Frame 4: No! Fatter!

Frame 5: Ok, that'll have to do.

Frame 6: And the bad guy (not really the cremy[wtf] he just isn't nice) will be represented by this...

Frame 7: Irish Communist Pirate son of Amy Winehouse on a num binge!  Amy Winehouse yaay <- Barrel of rum

Frame 8:Then stuff happens and the pirate and john end up in jail and salty chokes on a breadroll and gets depressed. The moral of the story - Alcohol makes bad stuff happen.

That's what I got from it. I think you should either use print or cursive, not both, it's confusing.

Also, I don't get british humor.

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[Spation]

Seriously, this topic isn't about my loving handwriting:
Give feedback on the actual storyboard. Jesus forgetkk.

[Khorde]

Also, I don't get british humor.

It's scattered and hard to follow. The story needs to be more clear and less of a random story in each panel. Try heading for a joke toward the end.

[Colten]

I can read it fine :/

[tails]

Enemy not cremy

mmm cream


Also you don't get british humor because its too awesome for you.

[Spation]

It's scattered and hard to follow. The story needs to be more clear and less of a random story in each panel. Try heading for a joke toward the end.

Yeah, I should have mentioned, that's just the beginning. There will be an actual story. That would last a minute or two in a theatre, not nearly enough.

[DracoSoul]

I... Didn't find it funny. At all.

[Spation]

you don't get british humor because its too awesome for you.

[General Omega]

No, british humor just sucks. It is similar to puns.

[Colten]

Enemy not cremy

mmm cream


Also you don't get british humor because its too awesome for you.

Or because it sucks