The "Patriot's March" text looks too simple.Liven it up a bit.
The skull is dull
Imageshack won't let me see it.
My first thought when I saw "CoF" was "Cradle of Filth"
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Needs more colors special effects. :D
Usually simplicity is 100x better than a bunch of cheesy effects.
it looks like a 10 year old drew it.