The new and improved 3D model topic!

[takato14]

That black barrel is inaccurate for the Intervention. Lol. The model is great, otherwise.

[Ad Bot]

[Unwritten Calender]

Sir.

Look at the handle.

Then look at the rest of the gun.

You see the size problem?

Also, he's kinda right... the body is kinda ugly shaped, thus all of the stuff sticks out of it oddly. Plus, the stock doesn't look right. So, more or less:

agree

[takato14]

What you are doing here is useless friendry. Give good advice that he can actually use or shut up.

The gun body shape is too box-ish. Try fixing that. The handle is too contrasty, get rid of the extrusion on the side. The ridge in the handle or whatever it is looks odd, change or abridge it. The stock is peculiar, nothing like what a real gun would look like. The way the front of the gun tapers down to a point (from the bevels) is bad, change that. The barrel is too bright, and the coloring in general looks bad/fake.

The clip and surrounding grey area is good, just change the main body of the gun. The polycount isn't as important as the look of the gun, because in this case you seem to have sacrificed looks for efficiency.

/usable information that wouldve probably been ignored

[mazeribot]

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T+T Bullpup Shotgun
I'm probably going to add a drum or something to it.
And it's 327 polys.

Uhm, The grip detail looks odd, try to carve the detail into the body. Also, the stock on a bullpup is usually the body itself, so make that grey part extended and shaped like a stock.

[Captain Crazy]

Pepperbox pistol. 116 faces.


inb4 "yellow shortstop"

[Kevin]

yellow shortstop

[Captain Crazy]

yellow shortstop

somic the hedhodge

[takato14]

Pepperbox pistol. 116 faces.


inb4 "yellow shortstop"

I'd suggest hexagons for the barrel holes. Otherwise, very cool.

[takato14]

Four-Sword. 850 tris.

Now to make a script that makes 3 clones of you which follow your exact movements. ._.

[Captain Crazy]

Four-Sword. 850 tris.

Now to make a script that makes 3 clones of you which follow your exact movements. ._.

now that's spiffy

[TheKhoz]

http://i968.photobucket.com/albums/ae163/Takato14/FourSword.png
Four-Sword. 850 tris.
Now to make a script that makes 3 clones of you which follow your exact movements. ._.

I like it... only thing I would suggest is to either smooth out the curve on that hilt, or to make it lower poly.

[takato14]

I like it... only thing I would suggest is to either smooth out the curve on that hilt, or to make it lower poly.

The smoothing doesnt carry over from the export, so I just did it to the blade for the picture. The weapon itself will be smoothed there.

[Aeschylus]

i accidentally in my pants

[Hydrabisque]

The smoothing doesnt carry over from the export, so I just did it to the blade for the picture. The weapon itself will be smoothed there.

If you use edge-split you need to apply the modifier

[ßoltster]

Plus, 420 faces isnt anything.

here we go