This movies production values were quite high. I enjoyed:
1) Napoleon Dynamite
2) Matrix with monkeys
3) The robot song in general
4) The ending
A few things though. First off and most importantly, the movie died around the middle with a montage of cars and planes running into walls...It got boring.
You were able to redeem interest in the end, with the car game coming out of nowhere, but I feel like 5 minutes of the movie were wasted.
Secondly, as Mocheeze said, the timing was a bit off. But what was really off was the music. When you can make your movie look like the music isn't just there because silence is boring (if you can time things with the music just right) you will end up with a better movie.