I'm going to have to say no.
The sheer amount of ramps used for the exterior really take away from its overall appearance and shape. It hardly looks like a house (I'm guessing that that's what it was intended to be, judging by the interior). The interior looks like it was rushed, and hastily put together. The build could also use a bit more color, as well; something other than shades of gray, a transparent blue, and brown.
If I were you, I'd try and build a few things with a different style, without cramming tons of ramps into the exterior, and maybe adding a bit of color. I personally don't like the recurring style in most of the builds I've seen you make.
I'm not trying to come off as cruel by saying all of this (my apologies if I do), but I'd like to see some improvements if you're hoping to join NWB.