Yes but I want to see him do better before he says it sucks. By better, I mean identifying everything bad about it.
You want him to do all the work for you? Be glad he even tells you there's something wrong with it. But hey why the forget should he waste his time and energy elaborating on that when you don't even listen anyways.
Also if you're going to start pulling that "I'd like to see you do better" argument on people, which is what you've been hinting at for the past 5 pages, I recommend you look up the definition of Critique, and what the implications are when you ignore them or pour fire on them (Hint: no one takes you seriously, guess why)