Author Topic: Spiderpig's Art Work  (Read 4137 times)

You like broken strings on stringed instruments, don't you?

Other than that, I like them. Though, a few of them need some work, like, the cat.
Well the violin I drew had its strings broken, but the guitar I forgeted up on. At the bass it has 5 strings but on the neck it only had 4, if I broke a string it would make it less notisbile. Oh and that cat, gee were to start. First off thats my real cat, I know some of you guys don't like and I can see why. But hey first time makeing a animal

Well the violin I drew had its strings broken, but the guitar I forgeted up on. At the bass it has 5 strings but on the neck it only had 4, if I broke a string it would make it less notisbile. Oh and that cat, gee were to start. First off thats my real cat, I know some of you guys don't like and I can see why. But hey first time makeing a animal
Don't guitars have 6 strings? :/

Edit: I forgot to actually compliment you on the violin, so... Good job!

Bass Guitars have 4

Ninja edit: o sht it has 5. A hybrid? :D

Do keep practicing. Ignore negative replies here, I think some of these people don't know what they are talking about.

My reply wasn't negative in any way. It was criticism.
If you ignore every reply that says that your drawing is stuff, you won't achieve anything.

Your on your way!
You seem to mix 2D with 3D objects in your pictures...

The shading lines are too far apart.

the first one just scared me... :c

what is the last one..

what is the last one..

Cross of an owl and a cat?


None of them are very good, but none of them are awful. You're shading is off, the proportions are blown, the colouration on most of them is pretty stuffty, but, all in all, I like the musical instruments, but the broken strings pain me :c

My reply wasn't negative in any way. It was criticism.
If you ignore every reply that says that your drawing is stuff, you won't achieve anything.

I'm sorry, I didn't mean to make that look like that was directed at you. It wasn't.

My concern is that most members of this forum (Not necessarily you, Fragger!) will constantly berate and flame without ever mentioning what's good about the work of others or providing any good feedback. Nothing discourages an artist like reading an entire page of "THIS IS stuff". When writing feedback, it's good to structure it like this;

-Positive comment (everything you like about it goes here)
-How to improve (criticism goes here)
-Positive comment (usually to the effect of "keep it up")

It's a good way to provide feedback without being too condescending. That's why we're here, isn't it? We're trying to help artists improve.


Oscar the grouch does not like parties, I assume.

No him and Wormy are throwing one. You're not invited obviously.

Oh, that just makes me angry!