Author Topic: My CotB app  (Read 1087 times)

Hi this is my CotB app. Its basically a big/medium sized house. I hope you like it (BTW Im sorry for the poor quality vid)

If the vid was to laggy for you then you can download the save (Don't claim it as your own!)

You need the props (house hold and flowers), my color set, the Blocko car and GSF Ghosts beach ball.

]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dCLHq8djh2Y
Youtube video to laggy (dont use snapz pro x. its not good for youtube + blockland.
EDIT: Constructive Criticism only.

EDIT: Enhanced save has been uploaded.

EDIT: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GMWkj3wXErY much, much better youtube vid (and on my old account)
« Last Edit: July 01, 2009, 09:16:41 PM by Roland »

Jesus, ever tried building without spamming props everywhere?

Meh, I would say No, if I knew I was still a Judge.

Keep trying though.

Overall: Why are the doors standing on 1x heigh-bricks? You have to make them lower!

Interior:
-kittchen/eating room is good (but too much props)
-shower is too little
-entry hall is too big (or at least too empty)
-the hallway on the first floor is too empty
-the bedroom is too empty and there is no chair!
-the livingroom is too empty too (try to add some decoration

I don't know why you haven't made a plant in the living room. I mean, you made a nice one in the hallway

exterior:
-the entry hall looks good
-the other parts of the house looke cubie (just saying it needs some ramps or pillars)
-garage should be bigger and more to the front (so it sticks out of the house)
-backyard is good, except for the top of the table thing (should be made out of ramps)

I guess that's it

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I like the colors you used :)

Jesus, ever tried building without spamming props everywhere?
Um I believe you don't have a right to critisize his build.

When did you join?  Exactly.  He is most likely better than you.

Um I believe you don't have a right to critisize his build.

When did you join?  Exactly.  He is most likely better than you.

Oh look, another ID discriminator.

When you post a build in gallery, anyone is able to criticize your build. Regardless of skill or how long they have been here.

Overall: Why are the doors standing on 1x heigh-bricks? You have to make them lower!

Interior:
-kittchen/eating room is good (but too much props)
-shower is too little
-entry hall is too big (or at least too empty)
-the hallway on the first floor is too empty
-the bedroom is too empty and there is no chair!
-the livingroom is too empty too (try to add some decoration

I don't know why you haven't made a plant in the living room. I mean, you made a nice one in the hallway

exterior:
-the entry hall looks good
-the other parts of the house looke cubie (just saying it needs some ramps or pillars)
-garage should be bigger and more to the front (so it sticks out of the house)
-backyard is good, except for the top of the table thing (should be made out of ramps)

I guess that's it

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Thanks for the advice. I'll add some more detail and then I'll re-release the save.

So this isn't the final save of the house. I need to work on it. So don't judge it as it is.

I'm gonna do what you suggested right now.

I've added some details. my new account stuffed up so I'm gonna have to use my old one. its RuneFilms1256 (i made it when i played runescape)

I'm sorry, But I say no. Just not enough detail IMO.


I've added some details
love to hear that!

my new account stuffed up so I'm gonna have to use my old one. its RuneFilms1256 (i made it when i played runescape)
What account? Your forum account or your blockland account (or youtube)?

love to hear that!
What account? Your forum account or your blockland account (or youtube)?
youtube account, i stuffed up one of the settings in my current one when i was making it.

I'm sorry, But I say no. Just not enough detail IMO.


I'm locking this topic, I put up the house to early. I will (try to) add more detail.