I disliked the lack of detail in the build; for example, in the last picture, the office chair is standing on flats, where you could of just used 1x1f for the spots you need and change the others to tiles for that extra touch of detail.
Also, the garden is way too empty, add some fences and bushes.
And of course, what spock mentioned, too many props and jvs.
For a build this size I'd give it a 6/10, make it flawless before you display it.