Author Topic: new story: the adventures of seth and zeek  (Read 4420 times)

well when I was 7 I made a story and never finished and today a few minutes ago I found it and decided to post it here oh and

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Hi my name is seth and my name is zeek and we love adventures. our favourite games are sly 3 and atv off road fury 3.
seths favourite character in sly 3 is bentley because he is the smartest. zeeks favourite atv in atv off road fury 3 is the fastest one because it is fast. we are a part of a small corparation called s.t.w. thats stands for saving the world. in this adventure you will find out about d.t.w. witch stands for destroying the world.

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one day we found these cool pets they were so cool we decided to keep them. it turns out they belong to a small corporation. now we work for them now and they gave us the pets. after we invited zeth to celebrate because he works with us. the next day we went to training and it is easy I grabbed the blade and grabbed seth. woosh we jumped off. I grabbed my pocket knife and the blade fell and burn't. now we are a part of the team. on the second week we got a misson. we had to stop d.t.w. at south dacota. when we got there it was amazing. of course we got weapons. I got a rifle and pistol. seth got a shotgun and a case of grenades.
« Last Edit: December 20, 2009, 09:50:37 PM by gun fun »

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Actually, it made no sense whatsoever, and I wonder how that could possibly fill two-pages.

Actually, it made no sense whatsoever, and I wonder how that could possibly fill two-pages.
I was 7 I wrote big and had no creative mind when im asleep

Very big. You can sleep-write?

wow that was just terrible

The Jester ,
There was a boy named Willy he went to school one day , out of the corner of his eye he saw something , A stuffed animal it was a Jester doll with a creepy smile and  letter that said " Do not open or else" but Willy was a stuborn boy he opened it anyway besides the warnings. The next night nightmares were haunting his mind, Then he burned the doll , Next day they find his body with the creepy smile of the Jester and a note saying Bye bye Willy muh haha,

                                                        The    End
                                                    by Lord Jester

                          Mien is the bestest rite?

Why would you type like this, Seriously? It makes no sense for it to be capitalized after a comma.

Why would you type like this? Seriously, it makes no sense for it to be capitalized after a comma.

I didn't right that silly Wynd!
Read the 'By Lord Jester' part again.

Very big. You can sleep-write?
wrote it when I was 7 and whenever I didn't just go to sleep

wrote it when I was 7 and whenever I didn't just go to sleep
So you wrote it a year ago?



I didn't right that silly Wynd!
Read the 'By Lord Jester' part again.
You're obviously Lord Jester.
So you wrote it a year ago?
He's nine.
wrote it when I was 7 and whenever I didn't just go to sleep
Oh.