Author Topic: Fauna Island: An application for The Craftsmen  (Read 2459 times)

[Info]
This island was created as my island for my "Fauna Isles: Ocean RP" server.

[Images]
  • Overview:
  • My house (Complete with large ears!):
  • Inside the house:
  • The garden:
  • The bay:

Constructive criticism is appreciated, as are suggestions. Please rate on a scale of 1-10.
There is also an easter egg; can you find it?
Edit: I decided to make this a specific app.
« Last Edit: December 28, 2009, 02:12:41 PM by Hawkclaw »

I like the landscaping; those stairs on the right side of the island are somewhat ugly; cool docks.

Why does your house have stairs to nowhere on the roof?

It doesn't, those are the large random ears. At least, that's what I think you're talking about. Thanks, by the way! c:

Argh! That house is a furry!

Your smaller in the house than normal palyers?

Your smaller in the house than normal palyers?

I think hes just smaller period.

In every screenshot you see me in I'm size .7, because... I don't know... :P

The reason for the house having large ears is that my friend that I met at computer camp makes animations and puts them on youtube, so he asked me to make up a new character. So then I made up "Mith", and since I was trying to think of a theme for the house I decided to make it like Mith's head. :P
By the way, his youtube page is Here. http://www.youtube.com/user/stupidespeon
« Last Edit: December 24, 2009, 09:52:04 AM by Hawkclaw »

Too small and not the correct amount of detail to support its size.

I like the landscaping; those stairs on the right side of the island are somewhat ugly; cool docks.

Why does your house have stairs to nowhere on the roof?


Those are "ears", and he meant Fauna Fauna.

How is it too small? The amount of bricks is above 1000 (1265 or so) if that is what you're thinking. Oh well.

How is it too small? The amount of bricks is above 1000 (1265 or so) if that is what you're thinking. Oh well.
My AoB app currently has over 4k bricks (i think) and i dont even have a detailed house yet.

Isn't the brick minimum 1000? Or was I hallucinating?

I didn't say it didn't have enough bricks. I said your build is too small. It does not take up much space. Your brick count is attributed to the fact your build is spammy; see: roof.

As much as it really does need a lot more detail, I like it. It has charm.

You should probably give the island some rounded edges and such; make it look less like a brick (lol) and more like an island. But it does have its appeal like this, somehow.