I suppose, but still, it's two paragraphs with two or three sentences each. I mean, damn, is it really that long? You beat me, you only needed two sentences to explain, but I insist two paragraphs with two or three sentences is not long (or "crudely brown townytical") like everyone's been saying.
It's not about the length, necessarily. It you wrote a long post that was full of relevant and insightful ideas and commentary there wouldn't be a problem. The "crudely brown townytical" comment is about how you make a bunch of obvious or irrelevant observations in your writing.
I understand that you think you need to back up your points, and if this were an essay in school you would be right. This is a forum though, and it's very casual. We're all, more or less, on the same page here. Make your point, and unless it absolutely requires explanation, people will be able to make sense of it. And you'll look like less of a space alien.
I am not trying to sound smart for forget's sake. But without details in the past I've had confused people. Suddenly this time around I'm being humped in the ass about it. And I'm not even using so many sophisticated words (if any) for that matter.
Okay, let me just get to the point of "Tommy". Tony (or King Tony, as he crowned himself) just isn't so remarkable or memorable anymore. He has screwed up in every way possible. He has completed a troll's life 100%, obtained all coins, secrets and stars, so to speak.
"Tommy" is an intentional misspell because I feel like I'm slowly forgetting the name "Lord Tony" because it has gone stale and typical. I cannot even laugh or be mad about something he says anymore. The last instance of that is when I said "Tony has a boo boo", and that was the last reaction I could pull off.
It's weird but it's true.
The parts in bold make you sound kinda self important, like you just wanna listen to yourself talk. And that's not to mention that you only actually included like one relevant detail, that Tony doesn't get a reaction from you anymore.
Let me reiterate: you are still learning this language. You should take our advice.