Author Topic: Leaf again...pagestretch?  (Read 4783 times)

The head doesn't seem right for some reason, but I laughed at the Blockhead in the corner.
What's it doing, staring at her butt?

Seriously though, this looks good. The blockhead doesn't seem too blocky though.

I don't know why i put the blockhead there :/

What's it doing, staring at her butt?

I just realized that's the direction he's looking, haha.

Full body design please.
I like drawing Battle Maidens.... ;C

The blockhead is better than Leaf.

Although Leaf is good.

Full body design please.
I like drawing Battle Maidens.... ;C
Wait what?

You need blueprints of some sort?

If you do, i will draw them up tomorrow maybe and send them.
« Last Edit: February 25, 2010, 10:06:40 PM by Tom Gunn »



Definite improvements over the original.

Are you using a posing doll?

lol no.

Now that i think about it, she does look like a posing doll.
« Last Edit: February 25, 2010, 10:20:43 PM by Tom Gunn »

You seem to go for a realistic body, and then a really odd head, this confuses me. A lot. Not to mention that you have that really odd pose that everyone uses for everything, where you have one foot forward and one foot away, it's funny because most people don't stand like that. I suggest trying some different poses that show some emotion and/or complex, yet common ones. For example, sitting in a chair with one leg over the other and your elbow on your knee and your palm on your chin. This pose shows anxiety, and possible boredom depending on the face. Then, there's the problem. Your faces are triangles with oval eyes with minor highlights. It's very hard to get a nice facial expression going when the original base character idea has a very limited spectrum of properties. All in all, I really think you should fix that face, and make it more human. This way, your character will seem a lot more normal. Either that, or change up the body or something. It's just weird.
Edit: And crop your image.

lol k.

I will try somthing more unoriginal.

I did a redraw, i will have it posted soon.

My new face design is not working out.

I will have to put the original and then try again.
« Last Edit: February 26, 2010, 08:22:50 AM by Tom Gunn »

You kicked the stuff out of my female body :\