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NickTheSushi didn'f seem enthusiastic about my idea, so...
Encounter(s) with a military cleanup crew with shoot-on-sight orders.
Yes.

:D

I might have to do this if Nick doesn't.

It looks like some gay left 4 dead rip off
at least come up with better ideas from time to time.

If you read any of the first post you would understand I don't give a flying forget what people think of the general zombie category. It's something that interests me and something I am going to do.

20 bucks says both nick's and caution's stories are going to either be really loving bad or they'll just be really good premises but stufftily executed.

Way to have loving faith. Let's just shoot stuff down before we really know how it's going to turn out.

expressing honest opinion =/= being a richard

I'm sorry but if you don't have any supportive or constructive input on this, then please don't comment.

How about it starts off with the main character driving the truck in the ruins of Chicago, and then his car drives over a spike strip, in which communist bandits who set the trap up take him hostage, and force him to join their organization to stop the newly formed Republic of Yar (Which is territory covering the most of the Midwest of present day United States)

Sounds actually pretty interesting, perhaps instead of the "communist bandits" it could be Skip's military.
« Last Edit: July 02, 2010, 03:25:38 AM by Caution »

:D

I might have to do this if Nick doesn't.

If you read any of the first post you would understand I don't give a flying forget what people think of the general zombie category. It's something that interests me and something I am going to do.
Way to have loving faith. Let's just shoot stuff down before we really know how it's going to turn out.
I'm sorry but if you don't have any supportive or constructive input on this, then please don't comment.

Sounds actually pretty interesting, perhaps instead of the "communist bandits" it could be Skip's military.

its what I do

don't forget to write plenty of drafts.



don't forget to write plenty of drafts.
Yes.
Edit for months until the day you realize you can't make it perfect.
I'm not joking.

Yes.
Edit for months until the day you realize you can't make it perfect.
I'm not joking.

exactly

1 More Idea: How about there is a guy just like your guy assembling a team, and he plans to "help" the survivors and destroy the corrupt military, but he secretly wants to take over the land and will actually treat the people worse than the current military does.

I'm writing a children's book for 1st grade!

Here's a little piece of it

Soldier Sam and the Zombies

Soldier Sam was walking in the Battlefield and then he saw a Zombie

Soldier Sam pulled out a P90 and shot the Zombie in the head

To reload a P90, you need to pull out the Clip from the top and put in another one! You might need a grown-up to help you with this!

Soldier Sam went to a nearby Radio Station to call for a Helicopter

Did you know that asking for a Supply Drop will make the Helicopters drop food and drinks for you?

Good luck on your writing. Make sure you post some excerpts of the mstar fishcript for us to copyright read! ;D!

Also, maybe have a character in deep moral turmoil, who must chose between his once "diplomatic way" or a now strive for sudden survival. If he was a politician, you could have him gain a sudden realization that, his survival tactics of preying on that which is weaker or ill-abled to defend itself is much like those which he used to practice in his previous career ventures, only now he has good reason. Before, it was merely for materialistic gain, but now it is for his very life. He finds that his moral struggle was nothing more then an illusion he had created, as he wanted to fool himself into believing climbing upon others was the only way he could reach his highest self, as he never found any other way. And soon, he begins to reform his own government, creating tribes about the apocalyptic world and attempting to recreate a new nation. However, once more, he falls under the influences of greed and hatred, and resumes his aggressive tendencies in order to raise to the top. He soon, though, finds that there are others like him. That even though he stepped upon those virtuous and or passive, he soon misplaced himself, and stepped on one trying to reach the same goal. And thus, in the shadow of the night, he is murdered, to represent that the turmoil we cause upon others is the pain that shall be sent back; that often that which you send out, returns itself in. And, in this case, the greed and hatred he released returned to him in the form of a dagger. And, within his final moments, he does not cry out, but rather ponders in an accepting matter,as he catches a short glimpse of the sunset upon the horizon; hearing the light chirps of crickets in the twilight.

Or he could just shoot at everyone. :o

I would rather go with your first suggestion, Magick, it was epic. Give names and add in a few details, take some things away and you would have a short story.

1 More Idea: How about there is a guy just like your guy assembling a team, and he plans to "help" the survivors and destroy the corrupt military, but he secretly wants to take over the land and will actually treat the people worse than the current military does.

This could be a very interesting turning point. :o

Good luck on your writing. Make sure you post some excerpts of the mstar fishcript for us to copyright read! ;D!

Also, maybe have a character in deep moral turmoil, who must chose between his once "diplomatic way" or a now strive for sudden survival. If he was a politician, you could have him gain a sudden realization that, his survival tactics of preying on that which is weaker or ill-abled to defend itself is much like those which he used to practice in his previous career ventures, only now he has good reason. Before, it was merely for materialistic gain, but now it is for his very life. He finds that his moral struggle was nothing more then an illusion he had created, as he wanted to fool himself into believing climbing upon others was the only way he could reach his highest self, as he never found any other way. And soon, he begins to reform his own government, creating tribes about the apocalyptic world and attempting to recreate a new nation. However, once more, he falls under the influences of greed and hatred, and resumes his aggressive tendencies in order to raise to the top. He soon, though, finds that there are others like him. That even though he stepped upon those virtuous and or passive, he soon misplaced himself, and stepped on one trying to reach the same goal. And thus, in the shadow of the night, he is murdered, to represent that the turmoil we cause upon others is the pain that shall be sent back; that often that which you send out, returns itself in. And, in this case, the greed and hatred he released returned to him in the form of a dagger. And, within his final moments, he does not cry out, but rather ponders in an accepting matter,as he catches a short glimpse of the sunset upon the horizon; hearing the light chirps of crickets in the twilight.

Or he could just shoot at everyone. :o

Jesus, Magick, in-depth enough? :p

That sounds like an even more interesting idea, it would be far different from any other plot in a similar setting I've ever seen. And lol at your second suggestion.

NickTheSushi didn'f seem enthusiastic about my idea, so...
Encounter(s) with a military cleanup crew with shoot-on-sight orders.
Yes.
I said I would use it D:

Could you add my character?

Here's what I wrote for him in nick the sushi's topic
Name: John
Age: 15
bio:
John was a good boy who always followed the rules, then one day in school he changed when a bully, literally, threw him away, then he was out for revenge, once he solved that, he was determined to rid the whole school of morons who bully people. Once they cleaned the school of blood he was dismissed from the school, and was never allowed back, and this being the only school around, he had to move, leaving all his friends behind. After arriving in Texas, he quickly made new friends, but he was never the same. After the zombie infection had started, he went and got himself a gun, and found his survival skills that would help save his life.

Yes.
Edit for months until the day you realize you can't make it perfect.
I'm not joking.

I don't exactly know what I would be editing. :c