Need an opinion

[LoLBert]

You should be carful. cookie doom got banned for posting his drawing you might also.

That won't be necessary, because unlike him, I can back up my claim.

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[yndaaa]

i really like it

[LoLBert]

That kid is skinny as forget. Draw some food in her hands. Then make another drawing of her eating the food.

Like that? Colouring it either way.

[LoLBert]

Coloured. How is it?

Edit:

Good job once again LoLbert, I like the coloring but the supposed shine on the hair does not speak to me properly for some reason.

I also see you are practicing at your hands more :o

Also, if you could explain more about the hair shine, perhaps I could do something. As for the hands, those were roughly drawn to get it over with; I'll try and redo them.

[TeslaCoil]

You know what, forget what I said, you wouldn't want to hear my opinion about the shine. I would probably sound aweful picky.

[LoLBert]

The point of this is to get better. If you have something to say that would help improve, I would be glad to hear it.

[TeslaCoil]

I don't want you mad at me, but I think the shine is just to much, and that you should probably stick to the first layer. Of course I don't know if this will help you get better or not, I'm just stating my opinion.

[LoLBert]

That doesn't seem like something to get mad about. Perhaps it's just me giving off a wrong impression that I would be sensitive to criticism, but I would even go far enough to say that I am the last guy I know who would be sensitive to criticism.

The shine could be too much, but that all goes to what style is intended, and there are many styles which are possible here. But, if you are saying that it is too much as in it takes away from the quality of the colours then I would look back and try and figure out something different.

I'm looking back now and will try out some other things.

[otto-san]

looks nice. :D

its lines are shakily drawn though

[LoLBert]

I'm ill nourished and this tablet is small so it's difficult to get good lines. :I

[TeslaCoil]

So...what style do you aim for exactly? I'm inept in this sort of area.

[LoLBert]

Hard to classify styles, unless I've been oblivious to what happens in drawings all this time, which is possible.

[Mr.Interceptor]

-snip-

Coloured. How is it?

Edit:Also, if you could explain more about the hair shine, perhaps I could do something. As for the hands, those were roughly drawn to get it over with; I'll try and redo them.

Success. It looks real good.

[Mister Cheese]

The colors seem good. :D
Ha, anime

[Otis Da HousKat]

The shine on the hair is weird since it looks like she either has really greasy hair or whatever light source is being reflected isn't affecting anything else in the scene. Really minor here, but the lettuce looks a little dark. I noticed that there is only a shadow being casted by the sandwich onto the table though, that again makes it seem like there is some wonky selective light source in play.

I do like the coloring of the wood table though, it gives you a good sense of its texture. The general coloring scheme gives the drawings a light hearted bubbly feeling (besides that lettuce).