A short novel I have been working on that has been getting pretty popular. I've been getting a lot of good feedback and I'm continuing to write as you read.
The title of the story is "Makanix: Various Events". The people in the story are all Blockland players, but some of their names have been modified to fit the story. The events in the story are based off of actual events that I have experienced in Blockland, twisted so much you won't even realize that's what it's about.
Due to it all not fitting in a single post, I thought it would be easier to post it on my (undeveloped and rather empty) website.
So far 5 chapters are finished.
You can read the story here:
Chapters 1-5Since this is a long term project, you can actually see my writing style change between each chapter. If you can't stand the first few, hang in there. They get better as you go.
To get my story more lined up, I wrote down the Chapter list and some character descriptions:
Makanix: Various Events Notes
Chapters have changed! The new list is:
Chapters:
1: Aboard the Argos
2: Tom and iEvent
3: Erased and Regenerated
4: Krypt
5:Competition
6: The Voyage of the Lily
7: Ruined Discovery
8: I.U.P.
9: Avialliance
10: Flight Training
11: Mayday
12: The Shadow's End
13: Infinia V
14: Departure
15: The Search For the Long Lost
16: A New World
17: Returning Home
18: Finale
Character Notes:
(WARNING: Spoilers)
Makanix: The main protagonist and narrator. A young 16 year old engineer employed by the clan ARES. Often referred to as Mak, he has brown hair and green eyes, wears goggles on his forehead, a green hoodie, and ripped green pants covered in pockets.
Comrade: The mysterious leader of ARES. A man in his late 40s. Has black hair and wears a gray ARES uniform with a darker gray captain's coat.
Ting: The Co-Leader of ARES. Ran for Co-Leader of iEvent after ARES shut down.
Poiuyt: Also the top row of the keyboard backwards, Poiuyt is a dangerous criminal responsible for Tom's accident. Has stress induced white hair and wears a gray prison uniform. Is currently cryogenically frozen in an ARES prison. Later escapes due to a power failure.
Tom: The leader of iEvent. Due to an incident caused by Poiuyt, he now wears a life support helmet with a monitor on the front that changes with his emotions. Also has robotic legs and hands. Usually wears a dark purple suit with a red tie, but at meetings will wear a light blue suit with a bright green tie, iEvent colors. Tom is probably around 30, but has no physical age to distinguish this.
Raeyok: The leader of Krypt. No info yet.
Khoz: A video game fanatic that uses technology to bring game weapons to reality. Competes with Makanix to make better devices.
Dr. Cyan: An inventor that competes with Makanix to make better devices. Wears a lot of blue.
Mack: The leader of Avialliance. No Info Yet.
Xeo: Co-leader of Avialliance. Later discovered to be Poiuyt.
Sgnir: Pronounced "Sig-ner". An employee of iEvent
The story is still a work in progress. Chapter one has already gone through massive revisions, but the entire story may still have some spelling errors.
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Thanks for reading!
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