It's a lot better than your first offering. Lighting leaves something to be desired, and even if something has no application in the game (such as a lightswitch box) when you're placing it logically try to connect it and give it function as if it were really an element in your building or whatever. Same goes for trash (is this a place where rubbish would logically collect?) and any other details (would this column be necessary to support the weight of the thing it's holding?) your level will end up looking much much much more professional that way.
