Near Death - A book I'm writing. (UPDATE AGAIN AGAIN AGAIN AGAIN)

[Awdax]

Ouch

It's still pretty awful logic.

Sure indy wrote it with intentions of him using it, but what if he didn't? comedy is in the state of thought that if someone has a similar idea, he can take it because he was "first."

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[fred da kiko]

what indyjones did was an edit. i did the same, but instead of rewriting it i used a correction approach that left comedy with maximum creative control. i also made it with the intention of helping comedy, but due to him being a jackass i've decided to tell him what i think of his work in the harshest way possible.

[indyjones]

Sure indy wrote it with intentions of him using it, but what if he didn't? comedy is in the state of thought that if someone has a similar idea, he can take it because he was "first."

I said I did and I thought I did.  Do you want a lie detector test or something?

[Awdax]

I never said you didn't say he could not use it.

[RedGajin]

i also want to take this moment to say he seems to think really highly of himself
i can't explain it
you can just
feel it
and that
that makes me ANGRY  

and you don't want to see jetrooster ANGRY
no no

[indyjones]

I never said you didn't say he could not use it.

Why are your panties in a bunch then?

[fred da kiko]

Why are your panties in a bunch then?

because comedy is being a massive cunt.

[TheABELBOTO]

and this goes to stories you seen but later forgot because its overly cheesy

[Narkro555]

Giant ants.

/Stephen King

[TheABELBOTO]

comedy can't accept that he doesn't have the proper education to actually write anything interesting. he also can't deal with criticism and reacts to it by shoving his head up his ass like a loveually curious ostrich. instead of improving his work he goes to great lengths to defend it, wasting more time and energy making up excuses than he would have used improving his ideas. comedy was an idiot when he first joined the forums, he's adapted to our attitude, but he is still an idiot. we've seen this kind of stuff before, a kid writes a 4 paragraph segment with no hook and no initial plot, claims he's going to write a book, gets pissed when people try to make his work better, and then gives up on the whole idea because it's too much work. the difference between comedy and those kids that came before him is that comedy pretends like he's some kind of literary genius.

well, he's atleast a coolbro, unlike me

[Kilser]

ehh.
to predictable.
to normal.

[fred da kiko]

well, he's atleast a coolbro, unlike me

no, he's an egotistical richard. you just don't make sense.

[TheABELBOTO]

no, he's an egotistical richard. you just don't make sense.

well, i just like to add things others think of him, just to be fair, also, ill add this at creepy pasta wikia

[Kilser]

well, i just like to add things others think of him, just to be fair, also, ill add this at creepy pasta wikia

what.

[Socky]

i tink comdy neesd 2 take a frikin

CHill pil if u katchup mah drift!! Xd

wink winek