Author Topic: I Am Awake -large story update inside-  (Read 38833 times)

Use refrigerator door as shield and the gun as a club




The gunshot was not from you, but from the guy that was on the airboat earlier. Was that a Luger? Snno rushed from the now bleeding corpse and threw a hug around the man.


"Captain Coat! You saved me!"



"Unhand me lass, this doesn't mean I don't think you're bad luck"



"Wait, you know him?"


"yeah, this was the guy who was going to kick your tailpipe back at the lake if you didn't let me go"


"Unlikely"



"But I was the one w-"

Snno just ignored you and continued to unload her affection on the Captain.

Well, now there's a dead body and two armed people involved in the middle of a city. I think your next move is important to your survival. At least it was in an alley, but someone was bound to have heard the shot. I think you should hide. A motel maybe?






matt: meet a cowboy and learn to be quicker on the draw
that guy totally stole your kill

I knew it was Captain Coat.
« Last Edit: July 15, 2012, 02:59:04 PM by *FacePalm* »

Let the police come and flash your badge.  Tell the the situation.
No, punch them in the face!

That is a MASSIVE collar

I knew it was Captain Coat. Also, another reason I say Captain Coat looks like Adm. Face is because they both have a similar emblem on their hat.

also i'm not saying you copied me.
i'm just saying he looks kinda like me
just sayin
yes, when you design a character that's incredibly generic, you'll tend to think other characters look like it

yes, when you design a character that's incredibly generic, you'll tend to think other characters look like it
adm. face is generic?
....
uh
oh.
okay.
:I


Oddly enough, nobody in the streets had heard much less payed heed to the gunshot. Which was weird. And you would be lying if you said you tried your best to hide the body. Rather than waste your time, you dumped it into a trashcan and took off. The Captain told you of a good motel for you and the rest of the party to rest at so you had time to gather yourselves together so you figured you would go there. Coat had generously given you the money for the room fee which you planned to pay him back as you took the room key from the guy at the desk. he didn't look like he had had a upbeat day either. Snno zipped pass you as you opened the room with the key.

"Yuck, this place is a dump!" She exclaimed.

"No it's not, it's a perfectly clean and nice looking motel room. And it seems to be well kept. Look, the bed is made nicely." You stated.

"That's just the problem! You humanoid types are disgusting in how you sleep! Why can't people just spin a cocoon in the corner like me!"

You weren't sure if you should pursue the subject or just change it.

"Is this a good time to ask more questions?" You asked politely.

"No, it's not like I owe you any answers either. I'm still mad at you for almost ripping my arm off with that fridge door! Do you still have that thing? Why are you carrying it around... ew I can still see my blood on it!"

She talked at a million miles per hour, which made it difficult for you to dominate the conversation. The Captain sat in the comfort chair in the corner, striking up a smoke on his pipe.

"I'm sorry ok? Why can't you just let it go..." you said trying to defend yourself.


"What's wrong with your eye?" Snno asked.

"My what?"

"Your eye, it looks broken."

"Oh... I broke it during a fall, I need someone to fix it because I can't reach the screws in the back. And I don't know where to get any replacement visors. Would you help fix it if I asked?"
Snno looked into your eye for a disturbingly long moment then opened her mouth to speak.

"Mmm, tell you what. I'll let you ask all your silly little questions now, If you remember to buy me some icecream. I'll even help fix your face later. But only if I get some dairy."

Ice cream? Is she serious?

You could tell her it's a deal, and be able to ask questions. Or you could just trash the little idea and ask the Captain if he could help you out. Though answers on the area doesn't seem to be his strong spot. You could tell by his passport which you glimpsed while in the Motel Lobby.

get some spoiled milk and then ask if shes part spider

get some spoiled milk and then ask if shes part spider

buy her ice cream and have a romantic ice cream dinner with candlelight because it's obvious she likes you and you like her i mean look at that blush

buy her ice cream and have a romantic ice cream dinner with candlelight because it's obvious she likes you and you like her i mean look at that blush
this
all this

You need to spend about 8 more seconds thinking before you draw these, Tesla.  The quality of Snno has gone down a bit IMO.  But keep up the good work.  

buy her ice cream and have a romantic ice cream dinner with candlelight because it's obvious she likes you and you like her i mean look at that blush
this.  
« Last Edit: July 15, 2012, 04:21:01 PM by morningstar »

buy her ice cream and have a romantic ice cream dinner with candlelight because it's obvious she likes you and you like her i mean look at that blush
you BROKE HER ARM

can you even trust her to be out of your sight though?
« Last Edit: July 15, 2012, 04:32:49 PM by Qwepir »