Author Topic: Need a good love poem  (Read 10535 times)

I wrote a new one


I cant think of something after "I really like you,"
Its not as good as my rap brother.
Im telling you!

BUT Ill be nice:

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When you're not there, my days are full of drear.
Your beautiful eyes hide the sun. <<What?
All I can do is fear. <<Youre afraid of her?
But when I see you, the sun rises. <<How do you know if her eyes block out the sun
When you leave, the sun sets.<<Again, how do you know
I really like you Meghan,
will you be my girlfriend? holla <<sick

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When you're not there, my days are full of drear.
My heart, it aches, when youre not near.
As beautiful as the morning doves
that rain down cheer from the blue skies above,
Your love it penetrates my very soul,
I really like you Meghan, dont leave me cold! holla

Its not as good as my rap brother.
Im telling you!

BUT Ill be nice:


When you're not there, my days are full of drear.
My heart, it aches, when youre not near.
As beautiful as the morning doves
that rain down cheer from the blue skies above,
Your love it penetrates my very soul,
I really like you Meghan, dont leave me cold! holla



lol I like it

I wrote a new one


I cant think of something after "I really like you,"

My advice is either to not write a poem and just tell her in person or tell her your poem in person.
If you do write a poem though don't stick it in her locker lol, as soon as she sees it she'll probably throw it away.

Also, don't listen to littledude's shallow "all girls only want love! if you want to do anything romantic you're a pathetic loser" attitude; it just doesn't work like that unless you find some easily convinced girl who has already done it plenty of times before.

EDIT: You've never talked to her lol? Get to know her first, say hello, help her if her books drop or something. Girls sometimes find it weird when a guy that they don't even know writes a love poem for them, even if it seems romantic, they'll still probably think it's weird.

Can you not make a love poem and not make yourself look like a demented rat.

Please wait 'till he next homecoming.

Elecro is the living incarnation of a hopeless romantic.

My advice is either to not write a poem and just tell her in person or tell her your poem in person.
If you do write a poem though don't stick it in her locker lol, as soon as she sees it she'll probably throw it away.

Also, don't listen to littledude's shallow "all girls only want love! if you want to do anything romantic you're a pathetic loser" attitude; it just doesn't work like that unless you find some easily convinced girl who has already done it plenty of times before.

EDIT: You've never talked to her lol? Get to know her first, say hello, help her if her books drop or something. Girls sometimes find it weird when a guy that they don't even know writes a love poem for them, even if it seems romantic, they'll still probably think it's weird.

I know, but I don't know what to talk about. She doesn't really talk.

I know, but I don't know what to talk about. She doesn't really talk.

Oh, she's shy also?

They when you grow up, your heart dies (Or, well, that one girl from The Breakfast Club says so). So you'd better be spending this on a girl who'll cherish you for you. I don't think you really need a poem per say, just tell how her you feel.

Elecro is the living incarnation of a hopeless romantic.
hi

Rap my song and youll get all of the bitches, I swear on jesus grave.


I know, but I don't know what to talk about. She doesn't really talk.
Why a poem that she would be shy and try to walk away?
A note sounds better in this part.

Rap my song and youll get all of the bitches, I swear on jesus grave.
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Why a poem that she would be shy and try to walk away?
A note sounds better in this part.
or grow a richard and talk to her but you know why do anything that makes sense right?

I wrote a new one


I cant think of something after "I really like you,"
Might as well just end it with "plz respond"

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or grow a richard and talk to her but you know why do anything that makes sense right?

I'm a shy person, also.