The Elias express

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That what train is this? THIS IS THE ELIAS EXPRESS



So, I have a friend (my best friend) called elias, He loves trains, And i made this for him and for my eternal love for the polar express
1/10 please.

Pics



http://tinypic.com/r/2vbjubc/6



Some cars and the observating car


http://tinypic.com/r/2vbjubc/6

Some of the tender, and a car, profile

Adding more pics soon.


EDIT more pics bro.




Locomotive

















Last car, profile








Observation car, Front



« Last Edit: February 20, 2013, 10:55:43 AM by danielmoya »

I see slight potential.
Make a bigger version, then fill in those tiny bricks with bigger bricks. Experiment with some ramp bricks, and replace the windows with different designs.
Right now its at a 2/10 level, but I think you can do better.

1/10 please.
Okay, but i have some ideas to get it better:
Try to use other then 1x1 bricks, they ruin the look
The roof can be more ramped, it should look better
Add tracks to it to give it a full look
!WARNING!: This is just me opinion.


(this was a ban from elias some time ago. im not being dismissive or anything)
1/10. its all 1x1 bricks

« Last Edit: February 20, 2013, 12:41:14 PM by Mouse droidz 21 »


1/10 please.
Ok 1/10

Wait, I mean 0/10
What is this, spam built in 5 minutes?

1/10 please.
PFFTHAHHAHAHA no.

and oh god is this related to that friend that banned me?
So, I have a friend (my best friend) called elias
Yep. I can't believe you would have someone like that as a friend. And worse... a best friend.

It's already bad enough that this uses almost all 1x1s in some parts.

-1/10.

.1/10
Only because of the potential it has. If it had none, you would have -100/0

1/10 please.
Okay, here is your 1/10:
1/10, would rate again.

To be honest, this is a very basic train build.
No details at all, just a rough build with blocks.

This is what Pliny build.
Of course not everyone builds the same way and maybe you only wanted to do it without add-ons, but still.
Look at how he actually made train wheels and the such, the details that he put in.

There is still a long way to go, but if you keep trying to improve yourself, i am sure you will get better at building.
I would like to see something better of you next time. ;)
Try to take the feedback and use it.


This guy know what he's talking about.

I recommend this feedback, but if you still have difficulties with it, then study real LEGO builds and study other real life pictures.

Here, take a look at these.

http://forum.blockland.us/index.php?topic=224737.0

This guy know what he's talking about.

I recommend this feedback, but if you still have difficulties with it, then study real LEGO builds and study other real life pictures.

Here, take a look at these.

http://forum.blockland.us/index.php?topic=224737.0
Oh these are very nice designs as well.
And indeed, looking at real LEGO builds and other real life pictures can help a lot while building.

This guy know what he's talking about.

I recommend this feedback, but if you still have difficulties with it, then study real LEGO builds and study other real life pictures.

Here, take a look at these.

http://forum.blockland.us/index.php?topic=224737.0
I don't think showing this guy Leo's builds is a good idea because I think he should start with something more easier to build more basic skills.

you're all a bunch of critics. I give this build a 10/10, I found it absolutely delightful and inspiring.

 :cookie: for you, danielmoya!


2/10, and im still too good.