Poll

Does Max deserve to be punished?

Yes! Let that friend suffer.
8 (53.3%)
no, don't kill max-kun :c
6 (40%)
what's a max
1 (6.7%)

Total Members Voted: 15

Author Topic: Reign - omg updoot  (Read 14385 times)

yes i was

on the first update, i was the only one in it
there's an insert button quote, man

also, you're not the main character anymore. in the recent updates, purple refrains from using any first-person words for Joel, ex.
Joel peeks out the window through the trees and sees something peculiar

You don't have to be in first person to be the main character. A lot of books for example are in third person, yet there is still a main protagonist.

You don't have to be in first person to be the main character. A lot of books for example are in third person, yet there is still a main protagonist.
lets ask purple then

purple is joel the main protagonist?!?!?!?
« Last Edit: October 11, 2013, 11:08:59 PM by TheKid »


fuq u he's winning anyway

it seems so wrong that the youngest person is the leader :^(

He's also the meanest. The douchebags are always leaders, thats how the world works.

He's also the meanest. The douchebags are always leaders, thats how the world works.
stereotypical call of duty-esque people are not allowed to be leaders

fuk u i oldst

Name: Jerome Smith
Age: 19

Jerome is the oldest and the only one that hasn't been mentioned in the story, that would explain the chaos back in the house.

If you want the oldest character to be the leader due to being more wise, Jerome is the guy.

Hide in the house and lock the doors

Joel starts to think how bad of an idea this is, and explains

Joel: Guys, I think we should go back outside
Joel: They probably have guns, and they'll shoot our asses down.
Raymond: No way, we should keep going
Max: I actually agree with Joel. This probably is a bad idea.
Raymond: Dude, come on!



Raymond faces Max, begging to continue on, but behind him, suddenly, a circle of flowing air appears. Max and Joel both look up into the sky to see a helicopter above them

Max: Crap
Raymond: Ple- Wait, what? Why crap?
Joel: Raymond, we have to go NOW
Raymond: What? Why?
Joel: Are you deaf? Look up!
Raymond: Oh.. Crap.





Max and Joel both spread their wings, taking Raymond's arms, and flying into the forest

Laser-targeting guns coming from the helicopter point down, but they don't spot them





4 ropes come down, and 4 government agents slide down





1 more rope comes down, and somebody else slides down

???: I saw them here
Agent 2: But Ma'am, we didn't see anyone.
???: No, I saw them here you useless handicap
???: I just don't know where they went
Agent 1: Maybe we can ask the hostage in the helicopter
???: He won't talk, so stubborn. After this we'll take him back to Arenavos
???: For now, split up. You, and you, go investigate the house.
???: The others and I will search for them in the forest
All Agents: Yes Ma'am!



Joel: stuff, they're coming
Max: We have to find somewhere to hide, quickly
« Last Edit: October 12, 2013, 08:26:55 PM by PurpleMetro »

>Raymond: Take out the encyclopedia and read up on camouflage methods in nature. Also question where Jerome is.
On an unrelated notice, how come nobody ever wants to submit any female characters?

>Raymond: Take out the encyclopedia and read up on camouflage methods in nature.

The encyclopedia has one section related to camouflage, but it's 4 paragraphs. You don't have time to study other ways. Remember that they're coming into the forest. Perhaps you can think something up instead

Also question where Jerome is.

Well, lets just say he's not in a happy place right now



heh
turd

jerome is obviously the hostage in the helicopter they talked about. don't hide in the forest, run fly in the opposite direction of the helicopter.

fly in the opposite direction of the helicopter.
this. also, fly in the forest, not above it