Nice way to do your school project thing. Honestly, if BP doesn't take the time to judge you themselves, instead of just listening to everyone else it'd be a bit upsetting. Moving on.
Fiscon's Rating :D
I'm going to go through and explain my opinion of each image, my reasoning for this is because I feel like I can't properly rate this with the images at hand, but I will try.
Yes, I understand this was all done based on a book for your school project, but you are applying for a clan, with this in mind, I'm going to rate it without a handicap. Apply with a build solely for the clan, make time for that build as well. It can be seen as disrespectful not to do so.
Image One: I see the front of your home, but barely, can you take a close image and perhaps add an additional window above what looks to be the patio. Also, a view of this patio from the right would be nice, much like the image of your balcony.
Image Two:
Ignored Image Three: Do you have a modified texture? I believe it'd be better to submit as default because BP makes builds usually with default texture; with these modified textures my eyes are thrown off and it makes the ceiling a bit ugly for me.
Image Four: Wide window would be nicely placed in that location. Perhaps extend your balcony out and add a small seating of some form.
Image Five:
Ignored Image Six: Filler is all I see, not even a variation in ground height.
Image Seven: Beautiful
Image Eight: Need closer image. Even if it is a facades I'd still like to see any level of detail.
Image Nine: Alright, I don't have any understanding the location of this room in the house. Nor do I understand this rooms purpose. It looks like a dinning room & kitchen, but then there are book shelves. The windows coming inwards, I believe that is a design element you intended, but as interesting as it is I feel it gives off a negative feel. I believe perhaps if the windows were built with a greater height it may have changed my opinion on them, but as of the moment no.
Image Ten: Misplaced
Image Eleven: You need to take another image. Is there any interactive parts at play? The classic water switch, perhaps some water in the tub? Is that a toilet to the left?
Image Twelve: Far far to empty. The bed is huge. If you were to remove the bed and replace it with a smaller one, I see room for perhaps a desk with a computer, dressers, side tables, 'paintings' on the walls.
Image Thirteen&Fourteen: Is image nine in the barn? I have no layout of this house at all and it confuses me very much so. Are those stairs to the left? I honestly believed them to be part of the wall design. Perhaps something to make them appear more separated would be nice. I feel like you could extend cabinets under the window by the kitchen.
Notes: I need a layout of this house, are there images of the kitchen? Closer look at barn please. What is image nine representing? Is that the inside of the barn? I'm going to give this a
five. It was an interesting build enough so that I didn't stop midway through, but there is much room for improvement. Some of which I have listed and so have others, hopefully if you are rejected you show dedication and continue to try for BP after improving, but that is entirely up to you and you alone.