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Author Topic: renderman journal  (Read 1711 times)

renderman journal
the story
1st day: God of rendy is hunting. We are talking and tommarow is work day. Horray! And God of render is drinking beer... lol. And Hupanda[brasil] left the cottage. And we had a bear for lunch! Yay! We chatted as we eat the bear and drink the milk. And we drove in a crismo, and chatted. It started getting dark so we get to bed
1st night: God of rendy saying Renderman said he exists. I told him he wasent. later i heard a noise and the light broke.
2nd day: A new person visited our cottage called Plvsvltra. And God of rendy drinked tons of beer. and Plvsvtra is a citizen. He says hes like Slenderman, but all black. And a creepy grin. The citizen hurt god of rendy so he killed him. And then Plvsvltra died from a crowbar.
2nd night: We went out to investigate. no signal. and i'm hungry! We ate milk and bread. Once i turned off the light. The detector beeps. Plus God of rendy fainted. I told them to get the weapons, and armor.
3rd day: God of rendy made a Renderman glitch gun AND a Renderman detector. this is my luckist day of my life! Also a jetpack.
And he made a burger king launcher. He spawned a human bot and tried to shoot it. Well, he was pretty annoying. Plus the bot planned to kill everyone on sight! Then we are changing things up a bit. And acouple minutes later Renderman was out there and the place looks dark. So i decided to sleep.
3rd night: I heard voices. So I woke up and sure God of rendy was up. I drove away. Now he was taking a poop. and died. Lol.

I used notebook for this. I hope you like it! I also made it sound better.
Thanks to
GooeyCuppy *me*
God of rendy
Hupanda[brasil]
Plvsvtra

« Last Edit: August 05, 2014, 09:52:41 PM by michaeldaken »

lol poop jokes hahahh

why hello there furling jr.

lol poop jokes hahahh
this was typed on blockland notebook too.
« Last Edit: August 05, 2014, 06:39:56 PM by michaeldaken »

this sounds like it was made by a 10 year old. to be honest, this isn't even mediocre. you need to work on your writing skills, there is no flow, action, adrenaline or anything like that.

this sounds like it was made by a 10 year old. to be honest, this isn't even mediocre. you need to work on your writing skills, there is no flow, action, adrenaline or anything like that.
no punctuation



this sounds like it was made by a 10 year old. to be honest, this isn't even mediocre. you need to work on your writing skills, there is no flow, action, adrenaline or anything like that.
fixed.



this sounds like it was made by a 10 year old. to be honest, this isn't even mediocre. you need to work on your writing skills, there is no flow, action, adrenaline or anything like that.
"died to a crowbar"
i lol'd