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Author Topic: My 2 year old creepypasta story.  (Read 1012 times)

I wanted to share this creation with you guys for entertainment. I cant even read through the full thing without breaking out in laughter. Anywho, here it is. If you want to see the original thread click this.
Quote from: Theepicman
Story starts now (Hope you know its made up)





"Sarah, so what is the new house you're gunna buy?" Sammy asked.


"Oh, its a two story house. Seven bedrooms, Four bathrooms, backyard, pool, and a porch."Sarah answered.



Sammy and Sarah arrived at their new home.

"It looks beautiful!"Sarah said in an exicted voice.

"Lets see the bedrooms" Sammy said


As Sammy went up the stairs to check out his room, he heard a voice.

"It must be my brain playing tricks on me"Sammy said to himself.

As he entered the bedroom, it became harder to breath.

"Wierd. It is suddenly harder to breath in this room"

With his real hearing, he heard a voice.

It said "You made a mistake"

"Huh? Augh, this mind of mine is playing tricks again!" Sammy said.

"SAMMY COME QUICK! THE POOL IS BIG!"Sarah yelled.

"ALRIGHT! I'M COMING"Sammy yelled

As he got out of the bedroom, he can breath normaly again.

As he walked down the hallway he saw some figure.

It stared at him.

"Huh? Who are you? Get out of my house"Sammy said

The figure said "You must die"

"Look mind, stop playing tricks on me"

The figure dissapeared when he said that.

Sammy got to the pool

"Woah, that is big"Sammy said

"I know!" Sarah said

As he entered the house, he heard a loud noise that sounded like a Deagle shot.

"What was that noise. I heard it from the bathroom" Sammy said.

"I'm gunna come with you" Sarah said.

As sammy and Sarah walked into the bathroom, they saw a note.

It said

"You have made the mistake."

"That was what the mind said to me" Sammy said

"We should get some sleep" Sarah said

"Okay"Sammy said.

Sammy closed the door. Then they both tucked into bed.

Not long, they heard footsteps coming closer to their door.

"I hear footsteps" Sarah whispered

"Its just your mind, Sarah." Sammy whispered.

The footsteps stopped next to their door.

The door slowly opened. A claw was seen.

"I SEE A CLAW" Sarah yelled.

"Calm down Sarah" Sammy said

The claw rushed into the room. They saw a figure rushed at them.

"AAAAH" Sarah yelled.

Just when the claw almost stabbed Sammy, the figure dissapeared.

Sammy and Sarah are panting heavily.

"That was close..." Sarah said.

"They fell asleep"

DAY 2




"I'm gunna cook breakfast." Sarah said

As she entered the kitchen, a knife was hovering.

"Woah, why is that hovering"Sarah said

The knife rushed to her leg

The knife stabbed her leg, making her bleed

"HELP!!" Sarah screamed

"I'M COMING" Sammy yelled

Sammy found Sarah on the kitchen floor, barley concious.

"Take...me to the ER" Sarah said


Sarah went unconcious.

Sammy rushed Sarah to the ER


"Fatal injures"The nurse said.

"We'll take her into a room"A specialist said.

Sammy prayed Sarah would be ok.

Five hours later, the doctors came back.

"There is nothing we can do."The specialist said

"She has passed away" A doctor said.

Sammy started crying.

As soon as he started crying, the lights went out.

The lights turned back on and he saw dead doctors on the floor

"What...what is happening..."Sammy said.

The lights went out again.

Red eyes emereged from the far hallway.

The eyes got closer

"Who..who are you??" Sammy said

"I am your nightmare..."The eyes said.

"No...please no!"Sammy said

"Die" The eyes said

Sammy got stabbed in his heart.

Sammy bled to death


Story over c:


Kudos to Duckman for making this image two years ago. I broke out in laughter.

Quote from: Duckman

strange happenings in my home? i know!!! we will go to sleep and cook brekfast!

this story takes Self Delete by stab to a whole new level
« Last Edit: November 30, 2014, 02:32:42 AM by Wrapperup »

"Die" The eyes said
well forget you eyes maybe sammy didn't want to die

Umm

How is a stab to the leg fatal? I mean, modern medicine!

Umm

How is a stab to the leg fatal? I mean, modern medicine!
Maybe they were black


Fatal injures

Just like OVREZ. Over easy.

Or "ovaries".

strange happenings in my home? i know!!! we will go to sleep and cook brekfast!

this story takes Self Delete by stab to a whole new level
I was thinking the same thing. My errors with writing back then are just hilarious. Plus I was pretty salty with RedGajin.
« Last Edit: November 30, 2014, 01:42:22 PM by Theepicman »



That's pretty good considering you wrote it when you were two. just kidding


i glanced through it and assumed it was an ed edd n eddy creepypasta


i glanced through it and assumed it was an ed edd n eddy creepypasta
Oh my god lol.