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Author Topic: ABS FIESTA REDUX  (Read 1246962 times)

good luck getting it when we're not at mcnamara
hmh yes right

I send a text message to requisition office:
"yes kthnks can i hav f-16xl xoxoxo;)"

I resume talking to Cassius.
"We could have kept that carrier safe."

My response is delayed.

"I know, that's what's killing me about it..."

I walk into the mess hall, seeing a few others there.
"Aye aye."

i noticed im the only one doing this in first person. should i be?

if you look, nozoner, hurricane, and i all do it in the first person
so does swat
I notice Mbombe walking into the messhall.
"Oh. Hi."

i noticed im the only one doing this in first person. should i be?

Personal preference, just be like this guy:
After familiarizing myself with most of the base, I decided to go grab a cup of coffee. The stuff at this base is nice. Not strong like freshly ground coffee from back home, but that just gives me an excuse to put more in my cup.

Making it to mess, I noticed a guy sitting by the coffee maker. He looked pretty pissed about the diluted stool he was drinking so I didn't mess with him.
Opening the cabinet I grabbed a coffee can, poured a nice satisfying chunk of it into the machine, and inserted my cup.

Bitter black coffee. Just how I like it. Not much can rouse me, but this stuff gets me going damn well.

Not this guy:
~Hank would look around at the empty airfield in front of him, he doesn't see a single plane, only the wind, desperately calling him to fly into it~

yeah i saw that but i was just asking about PoV
junco was fp so i went with that

generally i write it with a sort of 'in retrospect' tone

the narrator only knows what the character knows at the time, and is the character, but doesn't convey emotion in the narration- only emphasized text "ergo this" is the character at the time showing emotion

i also tend to not use punctuation to indicate i'm talking ooc

generally i write it with a sort of 'in retrospect' tone

the narrator only knows what the character knows at the time, and is the character, but doesn't convey emotion in the narration- only emphasized text "ergo this" is the character at the time showing emotion

i also tend to not use punctuation to indicate i'm talking ooc

Past tense.

It would kind of feel awkward switching back to first person after going with third person for the entire thread, but I do alternate between perspectives from time to time.

hey i'll be making aircraft in ksp
tell me the specifications you want (hardpoints, strike/multirole/air superiority, coaxials, etc). and i'll make it

hey i'll be making aircraft in ksp
tell me the specifications you want (hardpoints, strike/multirole/air superiority, coaxials, etc). and i'll make it
Phallic-Bomber

snake shaped strike aircraft.
im not joking I really want to see you make it fly too.

Phallic-Bomber

snake shaped strike aircraft.
im not joking I really want to see you make it fly too.

this is painfully easy :/

Phallic-Bomber

snake shaped strike aircraft.
im not joking I really want to see you make it fly too.
I see what you did there.

Phallic-Bomber

snake shaped strike aircraft.
im not joking I really want to see you make it fly too.
i'll do that when hell freezes over
now can someone give me a serious request