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Author Topic: ABS FIESTA REDUX  (Read 1611861 times)

are you operating two characters? I'm a bit confused.

You have successfully mistaken Painter for Kissinger.
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are you operating two characters? I'm a bit confused.
I'm Painter

OH well then thats directed at you then. Tbh both of you are trying to display emotionally distraught characters and because Hurricane wrote his so well your characters sudden spiral into insanity had me confused for Kissinger so it got overshadowed.

Continue pls
« Last Edit: April 11, 2015, 06:18:40 PM by Tayasaurus »

I hear the sound of boots move by me as I'm crying.
I stop crying, somehow, and look up. My eyes are still red.
It's Taylor.
"Hey Taylor."
I know she doesn't like to be called Taylor, but I can't really give a damn about anyone else at this point.

"Yeah uh. Don't call me that. I don't even know where you learned about my name."

I shift uncomfortably

"Do you want to hear a story?"

"Yeah uh. Don't call me that. I don't even know where you learned about my name."
"I heard your friend call you that."
"Do you want to hear a story?"
"Why not."

"I haven't been around long enough to know Steele, and given both Kissingers and your reaction he was a very respected and beloved man."

I look at Painter.

"I'm sure you've seen plenty of pilots come and go but he must have been pretty close huh?"

Its a little quiet and i wait for a response.

"I'm sure you've seen plenty of pilots come and go but he must have been pretty close huh?"
"Yeah."

I hand in the request to the clerk and head to the mess. forget the bureaucratic starfishs in the requests department. Everybody gives me concerned glances. I'm sure I look distraught. I snake my way to the mess, going in between buildings, using less-traveled hallways. I come in through a lesser-used door and look around.

Painter and helmet head sit inside. God, I've been an starfish to Painter. I think of an appropriate apology, and approach upon reaching a conclusion.

I sit next to Painter.

"I'm, sorry. Painter. For, how I acted," I force the words from my throat.

"I hope command and all the Huitz burn in hell," I say quietly.

"Six years ago i was a tank operator. Not as fancy as a job like piloting aircraft n' stuff. But i loved it. It was a piece of junk that me and my crew were all stuffed into. We were short on supply so the big guys behind the desk had us roll out the surplus hardware. What they expected of us was impossible, but we gave it to them anyway. We all stuffed ourselves into that little sardine-can called a tank and rolled out against superior firepower coming from the enemies side. We all knew what we were doing, we knew the risks. Hell, it was what we loved to do. The next day we were called to the front, as the enemy had somehow taken out one of our good non-surplus vehicles. They had gotten their hands onto some pretty wack stuff based on the chatter coming from HQ, and they got the bright idea that somehow 4 people in a pre-war deathtrap would turn the tide."

I take a big breath and continue.

"They were right shockingly. But it cost more than i believed that battle to be worth. While we were beating back their infantry our tracks went out on us. Something with enough heat had literally melted the treads into one solid piece. Our tank started heating up. and surfaces started to become too hot to touch. Call me a little weird for saying this but we all died that day. Both literally and figuratively. But the point to this story is, we all did it because it was what we were. Just like Steele, we all died with honor. And because of what we did that day, we actually won the battle. Ridiculous circumstances, but we moved mountains. Please don't think what Steele did was a waste, less we dishonor his memory."

"I'm, sorry. Painter. For, how I acted," I force the words from my throat.
"It's alright man."
I listen to Taylor's story.
"That must suck."

Guess he wasn't paying much attention. That's alright though, no point in getting friendly and too attached to anyone here on base.

I walk out of the Mess Hall and find my way to my bunk. If only the blankets were silk.

I snap out of shock after Helmet Head gets up and walks out. My senses come to.

I look around, a bit confused.

"Hey, what is her name anyway?"

"Taylor. Don't call her that. Especially when things like this don't happen. Call her Tibby."

Huh.

"That's odd. Okay, I guess." I say.

I put my head back down in sorrow. I can't get my mind off of it.

"What the forget kinda cargo is worth a human life! Scratch that, a dozen! What cargo is worth a dozen human lives!" I yell, and pound a fist against the table.

Tears run again. My hand stings. I don't care whether or not the wound re-opened or not.
« Last Edit: April 11, 2015, 10:46:34 PM by Mr. Hurricane »