Author Topic: The Maradonia Saga! "They're flying outta here like nothing!"  (Read 7016 times)

Dammit im out of flamethrower fuel, anyone got any spare gas or weapons?

Things like this need to be burned.

Here is some gas for you.


Gloria acts like she is a star and she acts like she is better than normal everyday joes like us.


wow these are the best books !

Here is some gas for you.


Gloria acts like she is a star and she acts like she is better than normal everyday joes like us.

Look at this writing, she's a prodigy!

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They did not see the end of it as far as they could see. The wall went as far as there eyes could see
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The unicorns enjoyed the race to the 'Nissan Waterfalls' and they were riding with the wind. It was a pretty long ride. Hoppy was still in his 'little hibernation sleep' and the doves were flying int front of the unicorns when the reached the 'Nissan Water Falls'.
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It was an edifying sight to see so many young men sitting in front of their siblings

Oh god link please.

http://www.maradonia.com/movie.html

It is literally nothing more then an edited image of a castle, slowly zooming in. Pathetic.



Why the forget did Gloria put joey as the age of around 14-17, does she not loving know one of her characters own age?

Why the forget did Gloria put joey as the age of around 14-17, does she not loving know one of her characters own age?
I lol'd.

http://www.maradonia.com/movie.html
Doesn't look legit.


Crap. After seeing how HORRIBLE and EYE-BLEEDING this story is, I want to make my own.

Quote from: Maradonia and the Seven Bridges
“Joey, you should know better! You crossed with your sister Maya the seven bridges of temptations successfully. You should know that ‘The powers of evil believe in teamwork’!”

She has a nasty habit of randomly 'quoting' certain words and 'italicizing them for no apparent' reason.

Doesn't look legit.

That is actually her only preview, aside from the crap in her 'book review' video.

Still reading the book... Abbadon is pissed off that his seven spirits lost track of the kids and their army and says this...

Quote from: Maradonia and the Seven Bridges
“The fact is that it is simply not possible for them to disappear with over three hundred people in mid air. We are controlling the air! Only we have the flying saucers! There are no other aliens from other planets horsing around in the air. People believe the nonsense that the aliens come from other planets. Let them believe it! We are the aliens! We are the rulers and the principalities of the air and we know what happens in the air. The fact remains that these three hundred people are not flying somewhere through the air!”

They haven't even mentioned aliens up to this point, or anything like that and all, and he also refers to the protagonists as earthlings for some reason. I have no idea what the forget is going on, but stuff like this happens all the loving time in this book.

I can write a better story than that.
Here goes.
THE STORIES OF MR. ARAB
Detained at US airport. The end. c: