Author Topic: The Taking of Isar [Episode 3 of 3] [Mini-series] (Read 33297 times)

TheKhoz · July 23, 2011, 01:40:30 PM

Quote from: Bahamut on July 23, 2011, 01:25:45 PM

Heh, and i also saw another one: HELL STREET. I think that was it. But i didn't see your sign Pi :C

Watch the intro again bro. I don't have a street, but I have the showroom. :P

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Tingalz · July 23, 2011, 01:48:58 PM

some of the voice acting was weird but otherwise it was ok
one thing i thought was bad was during the scene where that one guy was fired, he just stood there while talking even though icy was behind him. that doesnt even make sense

Custard · July 23, 2011, 03:19:08 PM

Quote from: Tingalz on July 23, 2011, 01:48:58 PM

some of the voice acting was weird but otherwise it was ok
one thing i thought was bad was during the scene where that one guy was fired, he just stood there while talking even though icy was behind him. that doesnt even make sense

We only had 1 actor for that scene. That actor was me :s

Barnabas · July 23, 2011, 03:37:54 PM

Gah, it feels weird that my building in Peggling City is just a façade, nothing more. Otherwise, I'm looking forward to the next episode.

comr4de · July 23, 2011, 03:43:59 PM

the taking of isar 1 2 3

with block travolta

pecon7 · July 23, 2011, 04:22:29 PM

It was good. Just the lack of much dialogue in the beginning made it a bit hard to watch at first.

Sniper-471 · July 23, 2011, 04:50:06 PM

Loved it, Cant wait for part 2.

captain blue · July 23, 2011, 04:57:00 PM

way too mellow imo

patton360 · July 23, 2011, 05:09:33 PM

After this, do a cronicle of ike vs rookie

Legodude77 · July 23, 2011, 05:27:42 PM

The guy working at the restaurant voice wasn't so good.

TomTheGeek² · July 23, 2011, 05:28:53 PM

i need to watch this so i can laugh at my own voice.

edit: Okay, why is the overall tone sound like Inception? Also I love the echo on my voice ;D.

edit2: looks like i got shot in the head... and from the credits the music looks it was from inception, but i liked it in the video.

Flush535 · July 23, 2011, 06:27:44 PM

Awesome, can't wait for the next part.

Sefou · July 23, 2011, 06:47:43 PM

Very nice work. Could use more PathCam.

Sheath · July 23, 2011, 06:55:01 PM

Thanks for the response everyone, I will take the advice into consideration, I can agree with some of the pointers.

Definitely right what TheKhoz said about episode 1 having to pretty much develop the entire background of the story in 12 minutes, the real action starts from episode 2.

Quote from: Barnabas on July 23, 2011, 03:37:54 PM

Gah, it feels weird that my building in Peggling City is just a façade, nothing more. Otherwise, I'm looking forward to the next episode.

I named that street after you and waited every day in case you'd come back. ;_;

suburb · July 23, 2011, 07:30:29 PM

Very impressive I hope to see more as you are getting better at your drama writings.