This is MY build:
1. you need to upload your image to tinypic, copy the image url, then post it here.
2. I can tell you a few things you need to improve
-a-Don't use 2x2 bricks for your walls, unless you overlap them like actual bricks
-b-Use larger bricks to take the place of smaller bricks for a smaller brick count
-c-add more stuff. A simple brick house could use windows, a lawn, etc.
-d-don't do stuff halfway. I noticed the roof ends in a top ramp, and it makes it looks lopsided. The door isn't centered or to the side, and that's all I've got to say for now.