Author Topic: [Story] - The Denial December Attack - DDoS Story  (Read 2919 times)

uh my builds are just fine thank you.

You're not important

then why am i in it?

i'm probably the most unimportant person on this forum lel

then why am i in it?

i'm probably the most unimportant person on this forum lel
You get a lot of drama
Idk that's really all I can think of

A tank came through, a well known Blocklander, Kalphiter, stood on the tank
"All will be fine. Please remain calm!" He shouted.
The combination of "Kalphiter", "tank", and "calm" does not make sense.


The combination of "Kalphiter", "tank", and "calm" does not make sense.

Says the person who makes video of him riding around tanks killing everyone in TDMs and then telling everyone to chill in dramas. Wot are you talking about?

You get a lot of drama
Idk that's really all I can think of

I don't recall ever getting much drama, lmao

Says the person who makes video of him riding around tanks killing everyone in TDMs and then telling everyone to chill in dramas. Wot are you talking about?
You don't understand
Kalphiter, tank and calm don't mix
Yes he calms drama
But when Kalphiter is in a tank, you get out of the loving way

I've seen kalphiter solo drive a tank and take out a tank crew. That's a driver, gunner and LMG gunner. And kalph won. stuff gets heavy.


i liked it until you tried cramming forum member's names into it. it got too complicated and it is easy to tell you just wanted to put all of your friends in the story. them being there didn't affect the story's plot progression at all and really was unnecessary.

you also need to work on not making every sentence a new paragraph; did you not pass 4th grade English?
« Last Edit: January 02, 2014, 10:30:01 AM by Passta Soup »

i liked it until you tried cramming forum member's names into it. it got too complicated and it is easy to tell you just wanted to put all of your friends in the story. them being there didn't affect the story's plot progression at all and really was unnecessary.

you also need to work on not making every sentence a new paragraph; did you not pass 4th grade English?

I thought your constructive criticism was good until you started insulting me.

Yes, I did pass 4th grade english. Did you?

Each line was basically going onto a new topic. You also have to make a new line when somebody is talking. I'm not so sure what you are talking about.

And everyone in the story aren't my friends, they are just some people well known around the forums I decided to put in.

i liked it until you tried cramming forum member's names into it. it got too complicated and it is easy to tell you just wanted to put all of your friends in the story. them being there didn't affect the story's plot progression at all and really was unnecessary.

you also need to work on not making every sentence a new paragraph; did you not pass 4th grade English?

lol it's funny because you're criticizing a work by a kid on a lego forum

lol it's funny because you're criticizing a work by a kid on a lego forum
Pointing this out made it even funnier

i should be the hero that saves the day
but seriously, what's with all of these random people

So what actually happened? I wasn't here.