Author Topic: Phanto makes another more hip hop beats [moe]  (Read 9058 times)

https://soundcloud.com/lilspringi/summer

some stuff i made for a friend
The pizzicato samples are a great source of melody, I love it. the synth hook it's set to gets tiring but when the other synths enter around 1:35, that definitely picks the track up and adds some more enrgy. I think this may be my favorite of ur tracks.


just bumping this a bit

constructive criticism is appreciated (i hardly try but meh, i just do it for fun)
im not good at giving constructive criticism related to music but i like these a lot. keep up the good work

https://soundcloud.com/n0b0t/dropping-bad-v1
Bass is overpowering in some spots, and there could be some more there in the high frequency range. Honestly I love the feel of this one though. Seriously, send me some stems, I'd love to remix this. :)

https://soundcloud.com/n0b0t/a-rap-beat-wip
I like how it starts. I would prefer the drums to have more syncopation, as is more common with hip-hop music (like what you have in the other ones), but not bad. However, when the second synth comes in, it is not in the same key as the rest of the song and throws off the feel of the track. Putting it into the same key as the rest of the track would help immensely.

https://soundcloud.com/n0b0t/something-different-i-guess-wip
Good vocal chops! Again, bass a bit overpowering, but a solid track concept. I'd love to hear some harmonization with the chops with maybe a background pad or synth. It's a little too minimalistic on the buildup though, needs some more elements in there.

https://soundcloud.com/n0b0t/synth-rap-beat
Idk, this one the sounds just don't seem to fit together, but it could just not be my style. The kick isn't very... hip-hop-esque, if you catch my drift. I think it could also use some variation.

https://soundcloud.com/n0b0t/all-star-beatles
Well this one's just a meme soooooo...

constructive criticism is appreciated (i hardly try but meh, i just do it for fun)

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