The legend of Carl.

[Alex Man!]

You put on the sunglasses, and it appears that it has a picture of justin beiber's face attached to the back of the lenses. What- HOLY BALLS THE SIDE OF A BUILDING EXPLODES, WHAT CAUSED IT AND WHAT HAPPENS GNGHHHH

[Ad Bot]

[LeetZero]

Rip the picture off and absolutely ignore the explosion.

[Alex Man!]

Alright. But then an alien with three starfishs bursts through the the building and starts eating cheerios. No pictures because it's 7:50 loving AM. (I stood up all night)

[LeetZero]

Take picture and send them to the government for money. 

[IkeTheGeneric]

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM TIME:

First off, you should work on the artwork a little, and attempt putting more effort into it. It's not horrible, but I know you could do better.

Next you should work on your humor too. Right now everything is either bathroom humor, or swearing constantly. You don't really have to work hard on this, just start using more than one form of humor, and whichever one has the best reaction with the community is the right one for this adventure.

Lastly story is important, too. You could put a little more effort into developing the characters and storyline more than just saying somebody's a bad guy and calling them "douchey".

Anyways, It's okay...but it's just too immature and it looks like you aren't trying hard enough.

[Brickmaster]

oh boy, SeventhSandwich made a drama topic for this.

[PowerDag]

Woah someone just unsheathed a sw-is that Gideon?
Oh stuff, it's PowerDag dressed as Gideon.

[BladeOfTheHorizon]

-snip-

USE POWER OF LOVE

[PowerDag]

USE POWER OF LOVE

IMPOSSIBRU
YOU DO NOT HAVE SWORD OF LOVE

[Alex Man!]

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM TIME:

First off, you should work on the artwork a little, and attempt putting more effort into it. It's not horrible, but I know you could do better.

Next you should work on your humor too. Right now everything is either bathroom humor, or swearing constantly. You don't really have to work hard on this, just start using more than one form of humor, and whichever one has the best reaction with the community is the right one for this adventure.

Lastly story is important, too. You could put a little more effort into developing the characters and storyline more than just saying somebody's a bad guy and calling them "douchey".

Anyways, It's okay...but it's just too immature and it looks like you aren't trying hard enough.

I made up this character on a piece of paper. People make up half of the story. This whole thing is basically SUPPOST to be filled with immature humor. It's a cartoon that i drew on a sheet of paper! But i enjoy drawing it.  But please, continue the storyline.

[Nymethus]

it was consle that blew up building

now consle wants to eat you

[PowerDag]

it was consle that blew up building

now consle wants to eat you

That would mean I am consle. 

[Alex Man!]

Mofos continue the storyline or i will eat off your nipples

[Jairo]

Mofos continue the storyline or i will eat off your nipples

The forget is this stuff?
Make him eat a pizza poisoned with grass.

[Alex Man!]

Oh my- I dont think he likes grass.
He starts to WARP REALITY AND MAKE THINGS BADLY DRAWN. THEN HE STARTS TURNING INTO SOME WEIRD THING. BATTLE MODE, ACTAV8T.
Attacks - 1 Shoot in the crotch
               2 Throw Douchey at him.
               3  GUN HIM THE forget DOWN
What do you choose?