York. I'm amazed that you took my insults and useless criticism so well.
Reveals a huge amount of maturity in your reaction.
I understand your arguments and agree on most parts. Expect the "starting from the beginning".
I think that the beginning should display the quality of the city, so you have like a body to work from.
Also would like to help, someone pm me pass! But I won't contribute so much, as I'm pretty busy.