Poll

period race

.
.

Author Topic: ABS FIESTA REDUX  (Read 1522589 times)

Touche

Name: Artyom
Nickname: "Revenant"
Age: 26
Piloting Preference: Air-to-ground
Backstory: His family was forced to leave the zentragothorum imperium and flee to NAUC. After graduating pshychology, he decided to join the radio communcations team but it was too "boring" for his taste. After a movie marathon and some years of expensive pilot lessons, Artyom is "ready" for air combat.
Personality: Kind of a two face. Outside the roosterpit he acts like a cool dude that tells jokes, who doesn't really care about what you think of his actions.
Inside the roosterpit is a mentaly insane psychopath that laughs for every enemy parachute gunned down.

: Both.
Cualli rubs her chin, thinking. "Well, I'd tell you that you have nothing to worry about, but I doubt that would really be of much comfort, would it?" She sighs. "I guess you haven't had a particularly good history with humans, given how cautious you are around them. And, honestly, you have good reason to be wary. But you don't need to be afraid of me. Hell, I got decked in the face for you," she laughs.

Inside the roosterpit is a mentaly insane psychopath that laughs for every enemy parachute gunned down.
are you loving kidding me

Walter grins and gives a light nod of agreement

"I'll have to pick up the slack, or I'll have some catching up to do myself."
: Just don't obsess too much over this. It's not worth dying for.

"What do you mean, things you come across?"
: You know, guns, bits of uniform, medals... there's a lot of money to be made selling war trophies. I got a few buddies in the Army who are always sending me bits and pieces they looted but don't particularly want to keep, and then I can sell them to a shop or an enthusiast and make quite a bit of extra cash on the side.

Cualli rubs her chin, thinking. "Well, I'd tell you that you have nothing to worry about, but I doubt that would really be of much comfort, would it?" She sighs. "I guess you haven't had a particularly good history with humans, given how cautious you are around them. And, honestly, you have good reason to be wary. But you don't need to be afraid of me. Hell, I got decked in the face for you," she laughs.
: That is true.

Name: Artyom
Nickname: "Revenant"
Age: 26
Piloting Preference: Air-to-ground
Backstory: His family was forced to leave the zentragothorum imperium and flee to NAUC. After graduating pshychology, he decided to join the radio communcations team but it was too "boring" for his taste. After a movie marathon and some years of expensive pilot lessons, Artyom is "ready" for air combat.
Personality: Kind of a two face. Outside the roosterpit he acts like a cool dude that tells jokes, who doesn't really care about what you think of his actions.
Inside the roosterpit is a mentaly insane psychopath that laughs for every enemy parachute gunned down.
It was a historic event, the first time since the war began that the Imperium and the Coalition exchanged anything other than gunfire and insults. All the Imperium asked was that the Coalition would turn over several proven war criminals, and in exchange they would return thrice as many prisoners of war. Already under criticism from their allies and several political groups at home for allowing said servicemembers to continue serving, the President himself signed off on the transfer. Since Artyom's repulsively aloof personality meant he didn't have any friends to speak in his defense, he soon found himself on a prison transport back to his former home.
After what felt like hours of driving, the personnel carrier Artyom and his fellow criminals have been riding in comes to a stop, and the rear ramp falls open. No sooner have his eyes adjusted to the brightness outside than he finds himself being roughly dragged out of the carrier by his captors. The sudden movement causes hm to trip over your feet, and with his hands cuffed behind his back there is nothing he can do but eat pavement.
: [On your feet, scumbag!]

One of the many Imperial troopers standing around bends over and grabs Artyom by the collar to pull him upright, before shoving him over to where the other prisoners have assembled. Looking around, Artyom can recognize all too well the grey skies and brutalist skyline of the Austerran peninsula; and about twenty meters away, the police have put up a barricade to prevent the jeering crowds from charging in and lynching the prisoners where they stand. Before he can gather any more information about his surroundings, he is smacked in the back with the butt of a gun.
: [Eyes front!]

And with that, Artyom and his comrades are marched into the side entrance of the stadium before them, eventually ending up on one of many massive parade grounds the Imperium is known for. The prisoners are ordered to halt while an official-looking fellow standing on an elevated platform finishes giving a speech, and no sooner does he finish than they find themselves forced out onto the field to thunderous booing from the thousands of Imperial citizens observing today's event. Standing a short distance out with their backs facing the crowds are three dozen Imperial troopers in parade dress, wielding bolt action rifles and assorted into two ranks; and across from them is a sturdy concrete wall.
Imperial Fanfare
Artyom and three other criminals are placed up against the wall with their handcuffs chained to it, facing the bullets and the crowd behind them as the firing squad levels their guns at you. The last thing any of them hear before blacking out is the sound of thousands of people celebrating their removal from the planet.

tl;dr comr4de is right, too coldsteel, try again with less edge
remember: two-faced psychopathy does not equal instant depth (and to be honest it works better if you dont immediately announce "this person is a psychopath")

: That is true.
She rests a hand on Elu's shoulder. "So don't worry much about me, alright?"

Cualli casts another glance to the Berkut. "I suppose we better get to work, huh? I'm sure you're itching to get to it." Removing her hand from Elu's shoulder, she continues. "I'm gonna go grab a bottle of water, you start bringing the tools over. I'm sure you know what to get by now."


laughs for every enemy parachute gunned down.
W A R   C R I M E S
« Last Edit: August 18, 2016, 08:41:20 PM by carolcat »

: Just don't obsess too much over this. It's not worth dying for.

"Yeah, yeah, I've come to favour stuff like this more."

he motions his hand around to indicate their spot and conversation

"I wouldn't want to miss out on it."

"I... I see. What about your other squadmates, the ones who..." Yui trails off, not wanting to state the obvious.

"Ah - better luck next time, Jaakko."

Growing tired of sitting down, Gus looks around the rec room briefly before heading out. A look out of a small window reminds him it is likely near dinner time, and he heads to mess.
« Last Edit: August 19, 2016, 02:46:54 AM by CypherX »

She rests a hand on Elu's shoulder. "So don't worry much about me, alright?"

Cualli casts another glance to the Berkut. "I suppose we better get to work, huh? I'm sure you're itching to get to it." Removing her hand from Elu's shoulder, she continues. "I'm gonna go grab a bottle of water, you start bringing the tools over. I'm sure you know what to get by now."
Elu goes to fetch your tools for you.

"Yeah, yeah, I've come to favour stuff like this more."
he motions his hand around to indicate their spot and conversation
"I wouldn't want to miss out on it."
: Hah, you're more sentimental than you let on.

"I... I see. What about your other squadmates, the ones who..." Yui trails off, not wanting to state the obvious.
: Died? What about 'em?

Growing tired of sitting down, Gus looks around the rec room briefly before heading out. A look out of a small window reminds him it is likely near dinner time, and he heads to mess.
Kommandant, Pansar, Coaxoch, Musashi, Yamashiro, and Xiaomei are present.
« Last Edit: August 19, 2016, 11:06:13 AM by Qwepir »

: Hah, you're more sentimental than you let on.

"I just enjoy the company of someone nice."

tl;dr comr4de is right, too coldsteel, try again with less edge
remember: two-faced psychopathy does not equal instant depth (and to be honest it works better if you dont immediately announce "this person is a psychopath")
I loving knew that he was too edgy.
stuff. This is loving embarassing.

A smell of smoke fills the air as a few people may or may not have noticed the game console was on fire. It's young flames were immediately killed as Tippy grabbed the extinguisher off the wall near the door calmly and sprayed it down.

After wiping off a little bit if the fire handicapant, she flipped the switch on the console again, which to her shock still came on like it had never caught fire.

"HAH. Still works! They build these old consoles like tanks!"

I loving knew that he was too edgy.
stuff. This is loving embarassing.
Don't let that stop you. Try again pls

"Who were they? What were they like?"

"Ehh, I'm not sure we should be using this console anymore," Jaakko says.

He blinks and his eyes sting. He unfolds his frame, standing up and stretching, feeling the stiffness from sitting in more or less the same position for two hours. The acrid smell of burnt dust makes the room unpleasant.

"I'm going to get food and take a break," he reports to Tippy.

And thus Jaakko goes to the mess. He gets his food but can't decide between which tables to sit at.

Elu goes to fetch your tools for you.
Cualli goes to fetch some water and comes back with the rest of the maintenance crew to get to work on the craft.

"They just love breaking their toys, don't they?" she jokes to Elu once he joins her.