Definitely better, but mostly just sounds like folk/polka with trap-styled percussion. The rhythm is still not very trap-esque.
Ye, I think the swing makes it less trappy and more bouncy. I like it tho.
EDIT: Made a less swingy version
here. I think it sounds more like actual trap but at this point I could care less.
Also, nice remix. Gives off a feeling of a broken machine at the start and segways into a nice beat.
Should there be a separate thread for Soundclown mashups? They're music, of course, but the usual posters in this thread make original pieces while me and a few others that I've seen occasionally around make mashups with other songs. It feels kind of weird and not right to post those here.