You didn't have to be offensive as to add an brown townogy
yeah I did because I wanted to. problem?
Just say what could use improving
as if he's gonna give a toss
it sounds to me like you just don't like the genre as it is not really used in machinima.
The whole series is based on some little stuff incident which could have been avoided but simply wasn't. So there you have the back story, utter stuff, and then you add one of these wealthy movie characters as Mr. blue squid-like man thing who acts like a total ass to everyone for no apparent reason, and then the master thief-type with such roostery confidence you wouldn't be surprised if his pants exploded due to the peer pressure every time he showed up. And then you add the little details like when you hear someone is using a microphone, when they're talking to themselves, glass exploding unreasonably, shootouts looking like any Blockland DM etc. etc. Now, on top of this, the most pretentious majestic music you could possibly use, as if you were actually watching TV, which makes it look ridiculous.